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I am enjoying this story so much that I just want to kick myself. I haven't been able to put it down and just savor it slowly like I should have. I knew it was a wip when I started it which broke two of my 3 main rules of fanfic. I don't usually read veela stories, I try never to read a wip, and I always read the last page first to make sure it ends well (well I guess I can't say always). So I started this story intending to only read the first chapter. I wanted to give a veela story a chance, then if I thought it had promise I would bookmark it and come back when you were finished. What I'm trying to say is that your story is just so good that it has made me break all my rules and I am now waiting on the edge of my computer for your next update. Thank you.

Amazing, amazing story.
I love that you make a point to never overlook the fact that Harry is very screwed up and that Draco knows that they may never actually end up together. The most frustrating thing that I come across as a reader is that authors often just forget the problems they created in their characters. It always leaves me feeling confused.
I can't wait for the next update :)
SSS

Harry and Laurent caught in a bad romance. Oh no gonna sum that every time now

I missed the reviewing the previous chapter, but let me assure you that both were wonderful reads. I especially liked Harry's episode of fear at the Manor. I like when Harry has faults, especially when he can't counteract them on his own. And although it is a bummer there will be no soon coming steamy developments in this tale, I'm sure that it will be worth it when and if they do happen. Once again, fantastic work.

Yay, loved both new chapters immensely!

Great story of course. I like the premise very much. Terrific use of Ron BTW I was worried about him not knowing but obviously shouldn't have. I look forward to more.

Wow. Competent, problem-solving, insightful Ron. Never thought I'd live to see the day. It seems he's really embraced maturity now that he's a father. lol.

Keep up the great work!

Thank you for this glimmer of hope!

Ron is a wonderful friend and I hope his actions have it made possible for Harry to accept communication with Draco again. I'd love to know Narcissa's and Lucius' reaction to the events at the manor!

Maybe it is time for Harry to rescue himself and let himself peace. Or better yet, to be able to accept being rescued.

Brilliant work!

Oh no...I feel so awful for both Harry and Draco, not to mention what Lucius and Narcissa must be thinking now.

oooooh, yay!!