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by Lomonaaeren

schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes he is :D I loooove your Draco so much! And yay for Harry going to Owen's place!
person NightLo
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Finally find enough time to get them all through...does Harry sometimes feel tired? or unwanted or insecutiry? or just too much? Does he want to share with others? It just seems to me that he simply forgets the happiness of sharing!
person SP777
schedule April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #10....

You know, as of this chapter, I really WOULD like to see
how Draco looks in full Veela mode. I don't know about anyone
else, but I'm curious.

Also, I don't care what Harry says, he NEEDS to confront his
'nightmare' in the flesh and get rid of him or he'll NEVER get
piece of mind again.

I wonder if Lucius could...you know...get the offender out so
Harry would have to track him & hopefully do what he REALLY
wishes to do deep down inside. Because you can't tell me Harry
doesn't want to feel that control that he lost when A-hole took
it from him.

As a matter of fact, that is what most victims want the most...the
feeling of being in control again...and not feel helpless. I mean
why do rape victims take defensive classes or carry some type of
defensive weapon. To not have that feeling of 'helplessness'.
Is that a word?

ALSO, despite all that being said, I'm glad to see that Harry is
trying with Draco..hard as it is.

Anyway, that's enough on that.
person polka dot
schedule April 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
how so very sad, working on your day off, goodness knows there aren't enough of them as it is
person NessaC
schedule April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting future personality you've developed for Harry, and if flows well with the way he is in the original books. Your writing is great, simple and straightforward, while the plot loops back on itself, which I appreciate. This obviously won't be a quick story with a quick happy ending. The characters will go through a lot, and I love that.

Great job, I'm looking forward to the next chapters!

~Spiritxx
schedule April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 10!!! Draco is making progress!!!
schedule April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good work so far I always love your works. I think Harry's "willingness" to accept the potion from Draco stems from him thinking that Draco would
attack him but see that he controlled himself. I wonder this would mean for Harry and Draco's relationships
schedule April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Draco is amazing :D
schedule April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Baby steps. Its all about baby steps with these two.

Have you ever seen the movie 'What about Bob?' with Bill Murray? Maybe what Harry needs is some explosive therapy.
schedule April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
poor masochistic Draco v_v
I'm glad to see an improvement in Harry ^_^
can't wait for next chapter