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for Veela-Struck

by Lomonaaeren

schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mmm. Loved it. Can't wait for more.
person SP777
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #11.....

Awww...can you feel the love? I loved the ending, kinda
gave a warm fuzzy feeling. :-)

Now, I MUST admit I was hoping you would let Owen try to
have Harry understand some things, but I guess it wasn't
time for that?

Will it happen in the future?
person Lady Of Clunn
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How wonderful to find somebody like Owen King!

I hope there will be many more meetings as he seems to be an outside more or less neutral party that Harry can accept listening and talking to.

Draco and I feel very relieved after all the progress that has been made in such a short period of time and all the doors that are no longer completely shut.

Great work!
person polka dot
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yeah poor Harry he should get an X-box then he could just rip things apart to his heart's content.
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing :D Love this so much :D
person Sarah
schedule April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
No! Lol I need more chapters! I am really enjoying this incredible story! I hope to see more soon please!
person Fel
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hate you.

Okay, maybe not. But I'm meant to be writing my own fics, and instead I've gotten sucked into your writing, and reading all of your previous stories. You're too damn good at this!

In particular, I love the way you vary your characterisations. You don't just portray the characters in one way, you change them from story to story, making every version entirely believable and yet different. I applaud you, and the richly detailed universes you create.
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo need chapter 11!!!!
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What Harry has said about the mind healers is bad really bad, are they evil? or just incompetent? And the Veela that said Harry was over reacting at the trail needs to be hurt yup. It would be interesting for Harry to get some help over what happened with the Dursleys since he certainly didn't have control there and his reaction to what happened could have been made worse by his past maybe? Hope that made sense. Please keep writting I really enjoy this story.
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mmm. Wonderful development.