rate_review Reviews

Wow, Harry is not exactly taking baby-steps! hey are progressing so nicely after having worked through this first crisis that I am terrified that something - the Sandys case, Laurent's relatives, Pansy, Draco's parents, Lucy coming home while Harry is there - might have everything come crashing down on them.

*bites nails*

Great chapter! I never thought that this very tentative touching could be so hot!

about #13...

*looks at authoress* Come on! Give Draco a break already!

I know Harry is conflicted, but I'm starting to feel sympathy
towards Draco more than Harry [I still think you feel more
connected to Draco than Harry].

Also, I'm beginning to notice that my questions about certain
situations are...hitting to close to home? Just give a simple
yes or no.

Anyway, I liked the beginning where it seemed like Harry & Draco
are coming along further than before, I just wish Harry would
allow Draco to let at least ONE feature that is Veela to come
through. Hell, you would THINK Harry would be more damaged about
the SEXUAL aspect of being with a Veela and NOT be so panicky
about a Veela's characteristic.

I mean, what's wrong with a simple croon?

con't...

oh, and it just occured to me you used 'digress'
AGAIN. That was sneaky. *kicks authoress*

about # ???...

Oooo....I get the feeling SOMEone is going to
go 'Slytherin' on someone and be sneaky, because
I can't see Draco resisting THAT temptation.

Can we say 'red flag'?

Well, I'm all cheerleader & poms-poms on this
one, though I never shook of those things in
my life! Well, except at a few games...but I
digress [I kinda dislike that word].

..and I double dog dare you to use it!

Anyway, I like that Harry is feeling a connection
to Draco whether he admits it or not. But, you see
it in his thoughts...

What a tangled web you weave!

I am totally confused and anxious as to how the Sandys case and Laurent

I can't help but think that if Laurents family find and free him there is nothing to stop them from making it public knowledge. Harry Im assuming would hate that. Did I read it right Im thinking Draco kind of wants him free becuase then 1. He can find him and 2. If he goes for Harry Draco has a reason to kill him that Harry might accept.

It is so happy to see that finally Harry understands Draco's feelings and really consider the possibility!

I think Laurent needs to have a secret accident. Yes, a secret accident. Yes. Please. Let me at him, you will never know I was there, yah.

so Draco wants to get him out so he has an excuse to kill him? That sounds like something Harry would hate him for all the way around

I LOVE this story! Keep it up!