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for Veela-Struck

by Lomonaaeren

schedule April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww.. sweet chapter.

Keep up the great work!
schedule April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've been writing for several months now on my own stories and when I saw yours something called me to read it.

I'm very glad I did. Your charachters are so multi-dimensional even as they are wounded and broken... I love it.

schedule April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 15!!! That was brilliant!!!
schedule April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
aw...yes yes... i will let Laurent be...but...this chapter. this one by far has made me all giddy with expectation. though...harry did mess up its allowed. He's still learning. I just hope things work out though...that usually never happens. anyways... good luck Draco and Harry... i will wait for the next chapter....though....when you get to Laurent..please...most painful way for me. please...rip of the wings. Let him feel the PAIN!!!
person SP777
schedule April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
By ALL means, if you need to express yourself OR clear something
up, then do so. I won't take offense, Lord knows I have no problem
saying what's on my mind.

The only problem is people take me TOO seriously, which is a
problem, because of the fact I have a very dry, sarcastic wit and
it comes across wrong when talking to someone online.

Which is why I have a tendency to not chat much with people
online, because I've met some sensitive people [mostly young
people] who have thin skin.

Bottom line, PLEASE just tell me to chill [yes that is old slang]
and I'll behave...that is until the next time. :-)
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about #14...

After all was said & done in this chapter that truly was the most
touching thing you had Harry do for Draco. :-)

Man, talk about a chapter loaded with pins & needles. The question
is who's the pin cushion?
person Fel
schedule April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, update!

The description of the Weasley family christmas was awesome, reminded me of christmases when I was a kid. My mum has four brothers, so holidays are always chaotic.

And Harry's present to Draco... that's so sweet. A perfect idea. Congrats, sweetie.

KC
person polka dot
schedule April 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would think Harry would hate Christmas. I am sure he got nothing while Dudley opened tons of presents in front of him, so I've always thought it odd that he didn't just shut himself away for the holidays.
schedule April 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fuck baby steps. Harry's making leaps!!!
person NessaC
schedule April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wowww this seems like a huge step for Harry!! Good for him!

~Spiritxx
schedule April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I do apologize for missing a review on the last installment, but I must take time to ensure you that it was equally as wonderful as the most recent. I cannot wait for more.