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for Veela-Struck

by Lomonaaeren

schedule May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved!
person SP777
schedule May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #....

All I can say is just another day in the Life of
Auror Harry Potter. :-)

...and that hex was clever.
schedule May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think Harry values his life but when he is chasing a dark wizard, he feels that capturing that evil person would be so valuable that any injury or maybe even the loss of his own life is warranted.

There could also be an actual death wish, sub-consciously.

I am so glad that Harry accepted Draco's care. Now let's see how the night works out,. *bites nails*#

Thank you for writing this wonderful story, I love it more and more with each chapter!
person NessaC
schedule May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was procrastinating a project. max limit 10 000 words, finally turned it in at 9566 :) Last piece of coursework for the year! Now I get to concentrate on exams and yet.... procrastinating again by reading this latest chapter.

Harry is so STUBBORN! Quite a contrast to the last chapter. I can't how frustrated Draco, and Ron and everyone else must be. This story does have a happy ending though, right? Don't tell me if I'm right! ;)

~Spiritxx
schedule May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nuuuuuuuuuu!! *huffs, crosses arms* really not this one? the horror and the agony of the wait. Ah..but Pansy is helping friends look for the wayward veela. *sighs* ah well, I guess i will have to keep reading to find out.

Anyways.... I do like this story and others you have written. I just wish harry wasn't so self sacrificing. It kills me sometimes. You would think that after helping save the freaking world already you would think that he would enjoy himself a bit. but..alas...when you are fighting so much what else do you have to do.
person fudge
schedule April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I usually love your stories, but this one isn't really doing it for me. I think that there are odd times when the Harry you are writing turns into a Harry of a completely different character than the one you seem to be portraying him as. It's like, ooc from the character you are creating in this story, if that makes sense. And then things seem to go really fast, then their relationship backsteps, and then it speeds up again, but then its like this big epiphany occurs really quickly. I don't know, it's just confusing. I've been trying to continue but this is one that I'm going to have to just stop reading...
schedule April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Draco should just become a healer and be done with it.
person polka dot
schedule April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I had totally forgotten this case, good they got it done.
person NessaC
schedule April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful!! Wow, I did not expect Harry to take such bold steps, but it makes sense. And I love how perceptive he was :) And that bracelet is amazing... Great ideas! Great writing!

~Spiritxx

PS. Thanks for providing procrastination material :D
schedule April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww!
Very well written. I enjoyed the last bit most of course, but I really got the visual for the bit with Fleur as well. Can't wait for more.