rate_review Reviews

Hi.
I read this chapter and I thought it a bit subdued. And I also noticed that Draco kept licking his lips, does that not give the wrong impression to Harry who is angry with him for doing this on his own without regard to what he wants?

Still I believe Harry has prejudice or serious difficulty in accepting good acts and good wishes from others...if he feels happy by helping people, why can't he understand it also makes us happy to help our beloved? To be honest, I believe Harry has very low acknowledgement or acceptance or praises of himself...something similar to low self esteem, just he doesn't act like one!!

Wow, this was full of tension, loved!

Me: 'Damn Draco, do you see China because that hole looks
pretty deep.'

Draco: 'Oh, shut up..'
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about #17...

Yes, Draco dug a hole so deep that I'd be surprised if he saw
daylight.

But, I liked the fact that Harry handled the situation in an adult
manner [props to the author'ess] and put conditions that both
could agree to.

..and all is now well with the world. Though I have to wonder
which of them is more...whipped? *cracks whip* :-)

I gotta admit I liked this chapter more than the others.

Ow, ow, owowow! It hurts!

I think they need to sit down and talk about this without trying to kill each other. Horrible things keep happening, they need a break!

So if Draco is telling Pansy that his information was false, what if she goes and gets the information from some other pure-blood? Then she will know that something's horribly fishy...

Oh goodness, I am so worried that the whole rape-of-the-chosen-one will be dragged out in the open and up and down the Prophet.

*peers through fingers*

It hurts so good. Can't wait for more.

you must update!!!

This story is wonderful. Its very... realistic for me that harry and draco would have problems like this in this kind of situation. Having some experience with this kind of thing it is refreshing to have someone take the idea of rape very seriously, and not have the victim get over the scarring with the perfect partner right away. Its not so clean cut as all that, and even though Draco really wants to help Harry, he isn't perfect either.

I hope they manage to work it our for themselves, eventually, and that Draco will have the strength to not mess things up during the burning season.

Beautiful. Keep up the good work.

Draco never would have gotten away with it. He's a wimp at killing, we already know that.

Very good story. I hope that Harry is able to understand that a family looking for a lost family member, at least on the outside, Isn't automatically bad and that Draco could be keeping with Harry's wishes and the MOM secracy on the case. Either way I hope you can keep posting great stories. Also, I have a suggestion. I know that alot of people do baker harry or pastery chef harry, but I haven't really ever seen wedding planner, for him at least. I think his need to help others and maybe his need to do something that envolves making people happy could lend well to this kind of thing. Also, with recent family experience, I think harry going into foster parenting would be interesting. I don't really see it much and with watching my niece get used to sharing with "new" older siblings recently being 3, would settle his need for family and the adaption to the troubles of children who might have been going through what he did as a child, a good way to settle past hurt.