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for Veela-Struck

by Lomonaaeren

schedule May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is still the only story that has my attention... I love the way that you have the characters and the storyline developing. I get drawn into the tale and anxiously await the next chapter!
schedule May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Does Harry have any romantic feelings for Draco? It seems the only reasons that's keeping him in this relationship is solely because it helps him to a more complete healing, and to save Draco one huge depression (which doesn't tell much about his feelings for Draco at all because had Draco been any other Veela, Harry would still feel responsable for their suffering) So... what are his true feelings for Drake-the-Human? *hands you the mike*
person SP777
schedule May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #22...

That was so ridiculously sweet that I think I might
die from the sugar rush.

...and I mean that in a good way. :-)

I wish I had a Veela mate.
schedule May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...Harry's slowly healing, but hopefully the Laurent thing doesn't ruin it even more. But I wonder, does the sudden showering of gifts mean something significant, beyond Draco just wanting to give them? Excellent chapter though, loved the end.
schedule May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The bed was a daring thing to offer from Draco. Good for him Harry has enough courage and determination to accept.
I've been squirming in my seat through all Pansy and Draco's conversation. She's getting so close! I can hardly wait to see how long it's going to take her to solve the mystery.

It's also nice to see Harry acknowledging his issues outside his relationship with Draco, like how he forced himself to eat Hermione's soup. "He had decided it would be for the best if he could just acknowledge what was wrong with him and do what he needed to alleviate it, rather than pretending that nothing was wrong." Wonderful! =D
schedule May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my most favorite stories so I have to apologize for not reviewing until now. I really think the way you're handling Harry's fears and recovery is pretty much spot on. But I'm feeling so sorry for Draco now *hangs head* I know they're making progress, but I'm getting a bit anxious and impatient, lol. I just hope that when Harry finally allows Draco to make slow and passionate love to him that it will be written in great detail ^_^. I'm so looking forward to the lemon and the build up IS DRIVING ME CRAZY! LOLOLOLOL.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
person polka dot
schedule May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my he's got a giant bed that you need steps to get to. Sounds too funny. Like a bird's nest.
person qwerty
schedule May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Things are looking good so far... I hope Harry doesn't push himself too far and then regress!
Great chapter. Keep going!
person NightLo
schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just wondering what have the two planned so that they could make some progress...would this involve planning and preparing for the blazing season? Would Harry know what would happen to Draco if a veela cannot be around his chosen?
schedule May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 22!!! Harry is taking time off work?1!! OMG!!!!