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Would Draco approach Kingsley also so as to fortify the false idea? Would Draco or Harry tell Ron and Hermione (or those who knew the truth) so as to make some preparations if they meet Pansy or Laurent's family? How will Harry react right now with so many new feelings and emotions to identify? BTW, will we hear anything from Narcissa and Lucius?

#23...

Apprehension & Intrigue...that's what this chapter.

Question is...this won't blow up in their faces,
will it? Because I'd hate for that to happen.

Do you think the rumor will get out of hand?

Your story is incredibly well written and it has gripped me from the moment I started reading it. Your ability to write the characters as they were in the original books, but allowing them to be realisiticly changed by the events you have placed them in is amazing, I could only wish to replicate that. The story makes me smile and worry in equal measures, for once I've found a story I will sit and wait to update. Please update soon, it makes me really happy when you do :D. (I just realised my tone changed from the beginning towards the end. I am quite a relaxed person, I just wanted to use the best words I could to capture my feelings for the story.)

Wow, all this progress Harry is making frightens me a bit.

I am glad that Draco is getting to channel his protective instincts into bribery and intrigue! Awesome! Even though I suspect that it won't work for long. I feel the approaching storm in muy bones.

Thank you for this hopeful chapter!

I do see Harry making more concessions than Draco. But I can't help still picturing Draco as a creepy half-bird half-man creature in this. Very disturbing image.

this is my second time reading something of yours and i am hooked. first i must say poor harry and damn that laurent for making things harder for our lovely couple to work out the kins but im glad they are taking baby steps, especially harry. draco's patience is strong and i like that about him in this story, he knows wat he wants but he also knows he has to play it safe lest he ends up punished for 2 weeks lol. cant wait to read more and enjoying it thus far :D

I'm curious Harry has to, at this point, perform the detection spells on his food would he allow someone else to do it for him if he could watch them? I was thinking about that when Draco asked if his elves could bring them breakfast but Harry would only allow it if he could check the food wouldn't it be the same if Draco did it and Harry could see the results? ok enough of that I look foward to seeing your response and the next chapter of this story.

It is really happy to see that Harry begins to try and care about others...still I believe once Draco calms down, he would want more explanation on Pansy's exploration...

Soooo need chapter 23!!! They're sleeping in the same bed!!! Harry ate food cooked by someone else!!!! He's really making progress!!!