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by Lomonaaeren

person NessaC
schedule June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the juxtaposition of these two scenes, we really get a sense of how much Harry and Draco care for each other and what they are willing to do (or not do in this case) to preserve their fragile relationship. I suspect Pansy's role is going to get much more important now, especially with the revelation of Russell. Aah what one would do for love...

Great chapter :)

~Spiritxx
person NightLo
schedule June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, I just hope Harry would be the first to realize Draco's veela needs than told to, as I think that would please and make Draco so happy...

I always believe...one character will show itself when he or she is in a foreign place without familiar people nearby, if he or she stays the same, he or she is the real person that they claim to be...now with Draco as well as Harry keeping each other promise and their trust, where trust extends even without the presence of the other...as they care too much that they are afriad of being the one to hurt, this is the beginning of a real relationship!!! BTW, Harry really doesn't need to frighten himself that he affects Draco so much and reduce him to be someone he dislike...the evil haunting Draco is back!
schedule June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow parkinson you just made a friend your enemy and what makes it worse is that its draco. lol poor girl. ah well she dug her pit now let's see if she can climb her way out of it. and on both notes i am glad draco and harry resisted the urge to do what they thought was right, that in itself is a step to building their trust even more even when things hit the fan. let's hope things get better before they get worse :o crosses fingers >
btw when do we see lucy and her husband again i think their methods on helping harry are beneficial but i want to see draco accompany him when he does one of this sessions. also the malfoys and this russell character must see how he plays a role in this more. :D can't wait for the next update keep it up
schedule June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovely plot thickening. Can't wait for more!
person SP777
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #26...

Maaaaaannnn!!! I was hoping to see Draco cut loose
and ACTUALLY use the allure on Pansy, I think he
has too many restrictions on him, with all this
need to not displease Harry.

To be a Veela and NOT be able to display who you
are? Shame....

By the way, I asked an author this, but they don't
answer folks, not even in an author's note...
what is MiCD?? I saw that in an summary.
person polka dot
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
somehow I can see Draco and pensy in a hair pulling fight
person qwerty
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Draco realized how damaging using the allure on Pansy would have been on Harry (though it would have been easier on the very short-run). Pansy's so determined - I hope Draco will manage to thwart her. I'm thrilled that Harry recognized that he still needed more time off - he's really making progress!
Great chapter! Keep going!
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good for Harry that he managed to stand up to Kingsley! It's a very good thing - the Auror department should not solely depend on Harry for dangerous cases.

And good for Draco that he managed to stand up to the temptation to use the allure on Pansy.

I must admit I am biting my nails in anticipation of a Laurent-Russell-Pansy-Harry-Draco-Malfoys-Ron-Hermione showdown. That's so many powerful people involved, it sounds like it could end in a massacre.

Thank you for such wonderful chapters! I was delighted to see all the updates after coming home from my holidays :)
schedule June 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
dear dear dear things are going downhill kinda fast and with draco going to see pansy i just hope it goes according to his plans and not backfire into something irrepairable. harry will pull through this even if he has to face his demons literally, draco will be their to be his support beam and if he needs any back up im sure their are plenty of readers who would be there without prompting :D oh and of course ron and hermione are welcomed to join lol. keep up the good story and looking forward to the next update =D
person NightLo
schedule June 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How would Harry feel when he knows what tactics/plans that Draco is using/planning to use...BTW, how does Draco (veela+human) feel in this situation? Would Harry be able to identify Draco's needs?