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YAY!! I saw this in the middle of my Anatomy class and of course I had to read it!! See what you do to mee!! Oh dear! *forgets about class and drools over the making out scene* Too HOT TOOOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOT!!!

more please!!! :)

I love it. More please! I gotta see how this turns out.

Definitely email me for the next chapter! I'm hooked!
I love that Draco didn't go with Harry, it seems like much more of a Malfoy thing to make Harry come to him.
The detail in this is perfect, and the characters are perfect.
Can't wait to read the next chapter! ^^
xXx

YAY!!!! I love the whole drag thing, it's really quite funny (not in a bad way tho). ^_^
But poor Draco, wanting Harry so bad. and shame on Harry...grr but yay....so confused with emotions
Keep writing please!!!
Update soon!!!

I just found your fic and it is f**king AWESOME! I love it and can't wait until the next update. ;)

You've GOT to post the next chapter soon, even I got horny at Draco's striptease. XD
I've got to know what Lucius will do. God, I love the Malfoys. Nearly as much as I love this fic.
Update soon. I beg you.
And if u have a mailing list, will you keep me updated? My address is pinkbunniesrevil@hotmail.com.

Excellent new chapter! And I'm glad you enjoy the copy of the story, it's always painful to loose a particular favorite!


I wanted to let you know that I don't think that your chapters are too long at all, you're covering just the right amount in that you fully show a 'scene' in the story and break off when the scene is over. Not too long but just long enough to tell the chapter that you set out to tell. Please don't feel pressured to make your stories shorter because you think the fans don't want to read or don't have time to read, for a truly enjoyable story we MAKE time and I think perhaps your dual narrative might suffer if it looses any of the natural 'feel' you have for each PoV. Just my two cents, keep writing girls this is a great piece of fanfiction, I look forward to your next update!

Ohh its getting good now. Draco doing a strip tease and a slight pole dance. Harry's in trouble now and Pansy is got a scheme brewing in the background. i wonder what Lucius is going to do when he finds out that his son isn't as straight as he thought he was. great chapter cant wait for the next update. I looked forward every week for the next update.

I have always appreciated authors who take the opportunity to make their fanfiction more than just fuck pieces, who bother to develop a little story arc to give weight to their works. This is easily one of the best in that respect, it flows easily and doesn't waste time while also building considerable tension for the final sexual confrontation. Also two other surprising things that don't usually work that hit home here; the sex scene is surprisingly sparse of elaborate sexual imagery but it actually accentuates it rather than take away; and two that both Draco and Harry have completely different personalities than in the original books which usually turns me off but works considerably well here. Very strong and worthwhile work in with the usually overburdened Harry/Draco genre.