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by thepretender501

person Dadella
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I would just like to point out that when a story I read updates, and it's a short chapter, I get VERY disappointed... stop apologizing for the long chapters because I get way too excited when I see them...
person Catium
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So hot and ohoh Draco is in big trouble now isn't he? Update soon? *Puppy dog eyes*
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Another wonder scene you girls are driving me insane!!! Anh... I do hope Draco gets a backbone or something... I mean he is gonna needed for the confrontation with mommy and daddy dearest!!! Once again loved the chapter and can't wait for more!
person kat
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So loving it. Wondering what going happen now that Draco's parents are back home.
person gypsy
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please don't let this be a huge fight scene between Lucius and Draco! I'm tire of that and you've got a really great story line going.

Not all parents kick their gay adult children out of their lives. Lucius has already almost lost his family twice in his life. (Voldemort's two reigns) While he may be an ass, I don't think it's too far a stretch to say Lucius might see this as only a minor set back. After all, Lucius is attracted to power and he has seen firsthand how powerful Harry is. He might even be able to understand Draco's attraction to Harry. I would just like to find a story line where Draco begans to see his father as just a man, as equals, trying to learn more about the man he only though he knew.

You can play up the heir angle and there are 1000's of ways to get a blood heir without him having to marry a woman. (Well, at least in fantasy fan fic there are 1000's of ways...) The writing of this story is really good and that alone would keep me reading even if it's the same old line of "Lucius blows a gasket, Draco gets kicked out, Pansy jacks with him at every turn..."
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love Harry's way of "talking things through", it's quite active ^_^
schedule April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh!!! Soooo need chapter 7!!!
person Catium
schedule April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god that was so evil, damn her what's her name Pansy's cousin for spiking Harry's drink, Harry spilling out all his secrets. But ohhh poor him inlove with some auror queer in denial. Totally understand why he left. Can't wait for more pretty please update soon;)
Loved it.
Catium.
person cerichan
schedule April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yummy! this one is on top on my fav list! smutty and angsty enough.
You better keep the updates coming, I broke my rule of never-read-WIP-ever-again here, so I'm watching you!
;P
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh ho ho! You are evil pure EVIL! That dreamsequence had me salivating!! Oh the posibilities! *giggles*