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by thepretender501

schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
o wow, you are the Overdose writer....my previous comment begging for more just increased tenfold! Love your stories:)
person Katonie
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ROTLMAO! That was a hilarious start! Please continue :D

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Katonie
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great start, i cant wait for the next chapter.
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thats cute. i loved the ending XD
person Dadella
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'll have you know I was skeptical, but so far I like what I'm reading... It's teh whole "two author thing"... it never actually seems to pan out for me, but your talent knows no bounds and I trust your judgment... PLUS I LOVE teh setting... and as always teh character is so very well written... I wish I could pull off this level of depth, but I suppose we'll just have to make due with your offerings.... NOW GIT TA WRITEN'!
person kdn
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love it already. bottom draco is so much better.
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice beginning!!! Can't wait for chapter 2!!!