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March 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
YOu are on to a really good thing here with this story.... I hope that you continue with it as it has a lot of potential.
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July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked the idea of this fic alot as a one-shot or more, very origional. The writing was a bit rough but i think if you took your time you could make this into a really good fic. Great job.
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April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please write more, I really like where this story could be heading. It reminds me of the type of book you can't put down because you just HAVE to get to the end.
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March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was very good. I'm looking forward to more.
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March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I hope you do continue, as this is quite an original beginning! :-) Thank you, HG4eva
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March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, I think you should continue it, and as for the sex scene good job, a lot of people get waaay to in depth or don't have the right amount of detail but you did an excellent job, and I think your idea will make for a really good story. I really hope you decide to continue, but even if you don't it's still good anyways.
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March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Powerful, funny, intense, hot!!!!!!!!! Excellent begining......... So I wonder? Who will be the triad completion? Blaise/Harry? Either is simply great or hey you got a lot of possibilities here.. LOL Please keep them coming!
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March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it.
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March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this story is awesome so far
i hope u update soon
i want to see where this develops :)
again its awesome
i hope u update soon
i want to see where this develops :)
again its awesome
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March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Really great.
Only one concern. Dont make herm fall pregnant, the sex scenes are so good it will only ruin the scenes.
Thats only my opinion. But great story and update soon.
Only one concern. Dont make herm fall pregnant, the sex scenes are so good it will only ruin the scenes.
Thats only my opinion. But great story and update soon.