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for Flaw in the Blood

by ColdWaterFairy

schedule April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow great cliffhanger, I want to know what happens next! I love it so far, keep up the good work.
person Vidori
schedule April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update!
person polka dot
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like that Draco's not a cowering damaged uke in this, though I suspect he will be an uke, but we'll see.
person Vidori
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You're doing a fantastic job so far. It's hard to find fics that are believable, but so far you manage to pull it off. I'll keeping an eye out on this one. Thanks for sharing your imagination!
person polka dot
schedule April 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Alright now they are getting into their horny teenager mode
schedule April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 4!!!
schedule March 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good start. Please don't forget to use more detail to describe where the characters are positioned on the bed or in a room etc. You lose me sometimes.
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I sooo can't wait for chapter 3!!!!
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loke this story so far. It has a good start.
person Juana13
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow, great so far!! hope the next chapter is up soon : )