rate_review Reviews

good chapter

Glad to see you've updated the story, but I think you're forgetting a few details. It takes a parselmouth to open the chamber (Lord Voldemort can open it for them if they tell him why they're doing it and he's willing to accept a powerful woman) and the naked gaze of a basilisk can kill you (or petrify if you don't receive the full force).

I mostly skimmed the chapter 'cuz I find sex with a snake to be kind of squicky. :P

Don't stop writing, though, the story makes a fair bit of sense. :)

Amusing, and we all get to daydream about big fat cocks. I hope you'll explain why wizards inherently have more power than witches though.