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September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What the hell is going on. This is crazy. I can't wait to read whats really going on.
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September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 14!!! What is wrong with Harry?
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September 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good plot, original too. A little far fetched, but isn't that what fanfiction is for. My only issue is that it moves a little too fast. Let the readers get used to a new idea before jumping to the next. it's a little bewildering. Also focus a little more on the relationships. The pairing are good but let us see how Blaise and Hermione get together and the same with Harry and Draco. if you ever revamp that is the thing you should work on. Everything else is really good.
I love Albus and Grindewald together. They make a good couple. I always wondered if that was cannon. As we all know Dumbledore is gay and they were good friends as boys. It's not out of the question for the two of them to have had an affair. I just want to point out that Albus had better get back into the swing of things soon here. i know this has cought him a little (ok alot) off gaurd but I'm waiting for him to turn the tables on the ministry. With him and Tom working together the ministry doesn't stand a chance.
One more thing. How are you going to explain Moaning myrtle? It's not a complaint, I really am eager to see what happens. I know I said there was only one thing but what can I say, I really love this story and I only want to see it get better. I love constructive critisism my self and it's always easier to see the inconsistancies when you arn't the one writing the story.
I love Albus and Grindewald together. They make a good couple. I always wondered if that was cannon. As we all know Dumbledore is gay and they were good friends as boys. It's not out of the question for the two of them to have had an affair. I just want to point out that Albus had better get back into the swing of things soon here. i know this has cought him a little (ok alot) off gaurd but I'm waiting for him to turn the tables on the ministry. With him and Tom working together the ministry doesn't stand a chance.
One more thing. How are you going to explain Moaning myrtle? It's not a complaint, I really am eager to see what happens. I know I said there was only one thing but what can I say, I really love this story and I only want to see it get better. I love constructive critisism my self and it's always easier to see the inconsistancies when you arn't the one writing the story.
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August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Thanks so much for the new chapter!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!
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August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #13...
Ooo...everything's about to get hectic in the next chapter! :-]
Ooo...everything's about to get hectic in the next chapter! :-]
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August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ahh very amazingly well written :D
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August 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
another fantastic chapter. this gets better and better
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August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please please!!! If you could let me know when you have more of the story done I would worship you forever :) I love this story and can't wait for an update. Keep up the great work!!!
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August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I soooo need chapter 13!!! When will Harry find out about Lily and James?
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July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love this but when are you going to update?