rate_review Reviews

Love love loved it!

Oh like this story can't wait to see what else you'll write. :D

Sirius was a randy little thing wasn't he?
Imagine boinking your arch nemesis and wanting more.
Very good - very good indeed.

great! i have a weakness for severus/sirius. i loved the very hot, very enthusiastic, delicious sex. and the thong was ingenious!

i think i am not the only one who hopes for longer fics from you!

btw i recced both "underneath" and "starfish" on http://asylums.insanejournal.com/bottomsnape/, and "underneath" on http://asylums.insanejournal.com/lupin_snape/

sorry, but both recs are friendlocked since they're nc-17 - i didn't want to get the comms into trouble!

Yay! Wasn't sure how you were going to pull off that pair (the boys, I mean, not the thong, ha-ha!) But you did it in a believable way, taking into account the animosity between those two.... and making it work. Of course, being hopelessly horny boys, they had to go for it, despite their antagonistic history.

I loved Snape in the thong-- how the material stretched away from his waist due to his straining cock and describing pulling the "floss" to the side, and how it would sneak back in his crack when it wasn't pushed out of the way. Nice realistic visual there ;P

Also, the 'starfish' reference was too hilarious!!!! Good job! :)

LOVE LOVED IT!!!

So freaken Awesome!!!

I loved how you made how both are different in their ways of love making. And that you explained Remus need to be anamailistic because of Moony.

Loved it!

Update soon!!!!!