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for In The Silence

by soldiersgirl0709

person Lissa
schedule April 14, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This was truly beautiful! 💖💖

schedule April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a lovely story, it's very powerful, romantic - I loved it
person Gertie
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was tortuously short!!! WOW. I love the first person POV, it made it seem that much more intense. I love that this Remus breaks away from all the other characterizations done so far. My only complaint is that it ended so soon. You know I am a total Remus junkie and I feel that this just wasn't enough. Thanks to you I now will have further scenarios playing in my head the rest of the day. I wouldn't normally complain but when one has chores to do, like spending time with the Mother in Law, that is the last thing you want to be day dreaming about. On the other hand, while she prattles on, I will have a very naked Remus in my head to escape to.
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing. And as odd as this might sound, I do believe that this is some of your best writing. Awesome work and I can't wait to read more of it very soon.
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful.
person smurphy
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yaahhh SG i have missed ya... i hope all is well and from your blog it sounds like everything is falling into place for you... :-) love this one shot i think you wrote remus wonderfully
person KellyJCR
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was so different and yet so wonderful. I love that it was all from Hermiones point of view. I loved the point in which she realizes that it not what he doesn't say but what he communicates by other means. Needless to say I loved it and am eagerly waiting for THe Doll House.Well done!!!!
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A very very beautiful expression of feeling and emotion rolled up in a wonderfully detailed intimacy. Not a huge fan of Remus and Hermione, but this definitely makes me think twice about that!!

Love and Hugs:

Lady B*
person daisymaeevans
schedule March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, how lovely! Very lyrical. Beautiful job, sis.