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February 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Nice. The formatting issue made it a bit difficult to get through, but still readable. Something doesn't like a bunch of your punctuation - not recognizing it, and replacing it with dark question marks.
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June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a beautifully written little piece. I loved that you took time to fill in a back story. Nice dialog! You are masterful! Thank you for sharing this story.
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March 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great story, wish you would write one where ron get the girl
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March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I like how you wrote both of them. It makes a lot of sense~
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was really sweet and very romantic. I loved your Harry. Very hot.
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A nice little story. Never really been convinced that those two belong together to myself but this tale is very well done in that regard and for bonus marks you didn't segway into some Ron bashing at any point.
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, hot AND sweet-- good job! Hermione being able to tell that Ron was recounting the Gringott's escape story, yet again, from across the room by his gestures alone was hilarious! I totally burst out laughing at how perfectly you relayed her weariness-- and had my dog wondering if I was ok.... :)
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am not ususally a reader of het- I am not even sure what made me jump in, but I am very happy I did. This is a very sweet story and very well done!
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March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was really well told and HOT. I loved the tentativeness of it at the beginning. You do UST so well. Harry, Hermione, and Ron were all in character. I also appreciate how you wrote all of the other characters. They just seem so logical for each other here. Thanks for sharing such a sweet story.