rate_review Reviews

Very nice story and i do say i have to agree with your opinions on ginny, no way in hell would they have gotten together in a sensible mind. Oh and as to Susans hair colour i think i remember the books mentioning at some point she is strawberry blonde but that might also have been a fanfiction ... it gets so hard to tell sometimes haha

That was sooo sick and oohh sooo good at the same time.

More...more...more.

Hi. I really enjoyed this story! I hope to see more with Harry and these girls. I would make one recommendation however. You might want to put a warning at the beginning of the story that Harry gets the fisting. I didn't mind it, but other people would. A warning that it happens would let people know so it's not such a shock if they don't like such things. Other than that, I really liked it, and as I said, I hope to see more.

thanks

Is this based on the films? Cho does not betray the DA in the books and Susan Bones has a long blond plait, not read hair. And whenever someone new starts talking, it's tradition to start a new paragraph. Your work is a bit difficult to read ATM

You really should write a sequel, may be just epilogue with Harry marries all four girls. Hope you make it because i like such endings. Anyway good work(excluding fisting).

Really good fic! I've never imagined Harry with Susan but you defo pulled it off, I hate Ginny/Harry too haha so I'm doubly glad there's no chance of her appearing.