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Hope you continue this :D

(Chapter 1)

Nice beginning. I'm wondering, however, why Harry can't "allow himself to be deflowered"? The whole relationship is a secret, so why wouldn't that be also? That's a shitty thing for Hermione to do, and for Ron to go along with, them faking an argument to spy on Harry. With best friends like that, who needs enemies? Its typical of her though, always shoving her swot nose into Harry's business. Looking forward to seeing where you're going with this, and to what Harry does when he finds out about his friends' duplicity and the invasion of his privacy.

good story

Interesting beginning, I cannot wait to read more. I like how everything is shrouded in mystery. I never expected Ron to be able to lie like that witheout lots of practice.

This story is amazing so far. I hope to be able to read more. Would it be possible to get emails when you post new chapters? My email is digiron91@hotmail.com

So hot!!!!

Wow that was very good!

Update Sooon!