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for When Do I Get to Have That?

by AngelNarcissa90

person Faery66
schedule June 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hope to read more soon.

=D
person AR
schedule December 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Looks like this story has been left behind, but I'll hope the bug will give you a little nibble of encouragement to continue this. This situation you've put Harry in--a werewolf's mate who's been bitten, but not bitten, who's wolf, but not wolf.... It's interesting. And it sounds like you've set up hints for the promised mpreg. You've also allowed for a nice little revolution to the wizarding world and it's views of sexuality and realtionships. Nice move with Ron & Hermione--could totally see them "spying" on Harry for his own good and out of the goodness of their hearts. Sometimes friends do really stupid things with the best of intentions, really. Little confused about Fenrir's and Rita's relationship. I do have a bit of an image of Harry and Fen setting up camp for other weres....a were village in the forest of Dean... nice, pleasent...with cubs running around. [frowns] Or pups, I guess they should be called.
person Aots
schedule July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see that you've updated! Grey was a delight to read about; you really made him into a character all of his own! I can't wait to read your next posted chapter.
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you're doing fine. Keep your hope up and keep trying. You;ll find something. (though I can't talk. I ended up on disability pension) So I admire your guts. the job mobs say that if you regard looking for a job as a full time jjob it's less disheartening... dunno if that's true but it can't hurt right? And use writing as an escape/vent?
At any rate, it's good to hear from you. Been a while. ^^
person Althydia
schedule June 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Harry is still not out of his predicament, but at least his relationship with Fenrir has progressed and his first meeting with Grey went well.
I hope that now Hermione is more open to other possibilities for Harry, though. If Harry showed that he had feelings for Fenrir and wasn't forced by him, would that be enough for her?
I'm not sure we've seen the end of Skeeter either, and I don't know what to expect from the wizarding world. Is Harry ever going to be able to continue his life as an Auror while still seeing Fenrir? Seems rather improbable at the moment. Also, I was afraid of Fenrir's deal with Skeeter concerning Harry, but he now seems to genuinely care for him, doesn't he?
But the mpreg part is a bit confusing now: from this chapter and the last one, it looks like for Harry to become pregnant he has to be turned, and Fenrir doesn't want to turn him completely, so what happens? Guess I'll have to read to find out more...
And good luck for your job search, by the way!
schedule March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, you definitely SHOULD have started this one. The only thing better will be when you update, update and update until it is finished. Again, notification or emailing list, please?
schedule December 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please update soon.... oreo.fanfiction@live.com
schedule December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
cant wait for more!!!!
person Just Call Me ACE!
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMIGAWDOMIGAWDOMIGAWDOMIGAWD!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS STORY IS SOOOOOOO AMAAAAAAAZIIIIINNNNNGGGG!!!!! I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING IT! PLEASE CONTINUE TO UPDATE AND DON'T DROP OFF THE FACE OF THE EARTH LIKE MANY OF THE OTHER 'FERRY' WRITERS DO! U IZ BEE LITERRRAIREE GEEEENEEEEUSS!
schedule November 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yay new chapter! it was good.