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This story is pretty good so far but I really wanna know what happens to draco and what hapens when Hermione finds out who her true parents are! Please update again soon!

Please keeping writing . I really love it please email when get new chapter on

okay so I've only read two chapters...I know I know...I'ma read more, I just thought I would review first and let you know that I think this is a great story. I do see that you are having trouble going back and forth from present tense and past tense. If you need a beta I can totally do it for you.

A good story thus far. When I saw what Albus did, I wanted to reach into the computer and into the dimension where this is happening and THROTTLE the meddling old fool for kidnapping Hermione from her parents, whether or not they were 'Dark' (which by the way, is solely someone else looking at what you are doing and disagreeing with it in most cases).

Interesting story; although, the grammer and spelling is lacking. I wonder why Hermione kissed Draco. How come you didn't explain it? Can't wait to find out how this turns out. :)

Oh, one more thing. Thanks for not following Cosmyk suggestions. I would probably stop reading it if that was the case. Don't mean to insult, but really don't like the type of plots cosmyk suggested. Stick with where you already went and I'm sure this will be a good story. :D I'm also of the thought that she should like Draco.

Well, I have a suggestion if you are interested since you have changed the story line so much anyway, why don't you put her and Ron in Slytherin and Malfoy and Potter in Gryffindor. Wouldn't Lucious SH** a brick if his son was in Gryffindor? Also, this way, you could have the Dark Hermione resisting the advances of Ron (Or seducing him under her control) as she tries to Seduce the Perfect Pair: Malfoy and Potter. Just a suggestion. Hope you like it.

Cosmyk

Hello. I believe you should put Hermione in her own environment. Put her in Griffyndor where she should befriend Ron and Harry, This is what Dumbledore would have wanted because he knows her true identity, wouldnt he want her to team up with Harry because Harry is so good. She can have a mean streak, or a hidden agenda. Maybe with all her book worm knowledge she can find out who she is by research because its obvious that her appearance charm may be up sooner or later.And obviously she needs to be in love with Draco <3 Keep writing, you will find your muse sometime!

wow that was great i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

Nice update can't wait for more. Excited to see what will happen.