rate_review Reviews

Honestly, you're having a bit of dead butterfly syndrome here. You introduce a major change like Pansy, and it amounts to... nothing. Apart from a bit of bickering, you're following DH so closely you could be filming the movie for JKR. I liked the other story, but if this is just going to be a rehash of canon with "and Pansy" inserted after "Hermione, Ron, and Harry" for each scene, I think I'm going to give it a pass.

I've enjoyed reading about this story, and think your pulling it off quite well. Quite frankly sex and good plots rarely mix because most authors are to afraid to write about sex or it's the only thing they write about.

You've managed to weave them together in a story with strong characters, and a surprisingly decent plot. Credit where credit is due.

Bwahahahaha.. I loved your breakdown of Dumbledore's opinion. hehehe

Also, you're continuing this! Gasp! This should be exciting.
Pansy is a real trooper to put up with all this shit for Harry.
Keep up the great work!

Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!
I loved your prequel and this will most likely blow my mind! Thank you for starting this.
Pretty rushed this felt but it was okay. you needed to get the fic started. I did enjoy the open hostility towards Pansy and even more how harry remains her knight in shining armor. I can't wait until they finally start the official hunt. In the original, it was only ron who left during all this but what about now? Hermione and Pansy are on the warpath (or rather Hermione is on a crusade agaisnt Pansy) so its not completely unexpected for her to suddenly join Ron on his escape. I'm just speculating, pleace dont do that. i know hermione (at least how i picture her) is more rational than that.
I like this is now, it starts everyone vs Pansy and Harry and how they are forced to show the world that they belong together. I cant wait until i read more.

I wasn't sure about the idea of Pansy going on the Horcrux hunt, but this first chapter has me interested for sure. I'm curious to find out how her presence will change certain events, especially between the Trio.

feel free to branch out of the originial story some and make it your own. Mostly your not changing much as far as plot goes but take the liberty. personaly I am looking forward to Pansy showing both Ron and Hermione that she is more than just a pretty lay or bed warmer for Harry. Should be intresting. Keep it up.

All in all, its a good start, although I wish you had covered more of what happened in the month between Pansy's and Harry's arrivals.