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well, this is... something new. I have read your other fic where Harry gets up in his ass by Hermione. I have to admit, it was hot. But i dont think i enjoy him being tied down like this. Toys themselves dont really bother me but he being helpless and tied up like this time... sorry to say it but doenst sound 'manly' to me. Sorry if it comes out the wrong way. Everyone has a right to enjoy what they like and write about it etc. But i personally just dont get kicks of men being overwhelmed by women anyway (why Hermione pegging Harry was such a turn on is beyond on) but general rule remains. I did enjoy this chapter though in general. Even though i hope you dont write too much of those fight scenes. They dont really interest me. i did like the continuing battle between Pansy and Hermione. Dont botheer wtih time with the cost of quality. This is not PWP. Plot matters a lot, so unless you're going to release some tension by writing a chapter about Harry shagging Pansy senseless, take your time.

In the books Ron just didn't seem all that smart and generally acted like a prat. If you can write Ron as being reasonably intelligent, I see nothing wrong with R/Hr scenes. Just write the parts that move the story along, and Hermione removes the stick from her arse, including the smut if it moves the story along (which is largely relationship and character development). The parts in DH I liked least were the scenes where they were basically camping in the woods.

Whatever you decide to do, I look forward to more. :)

Personal advice for the story is do what the story wants you to do. If you want to follow the story, its your call, if not the same. personally I would follow the book loosley keeping the main events but altering them as you see fit to incorporate the new person. Or just follow the vision of the story as you saw it when it started. Really its your call, I have enjoyed all of it so far and look forward to seeing were you go with it either way.

Personally I think that if Hermione just got laid, she might be more laid back about Harry and Pansy. I'm just saying. lol

Anyway, keep up the great work. I like the direction you're headed with a change from the canon.

I'm really liking the story, and I look forward to seeing where you take it.

As far as your questions concerning how the story should go, you're the author, so you should pick whatever options motivate you to write the most.

Personally, I dislike the R/Hr pairing, although I do like the characters. If you write R/Hr scenes, I won't bother to read them and will skip them to get to the rest of the story, but if you feel the story needs them then write them. I'm definitely enjoying all of the story so far!

i absolutely love your story! I also love that there are consequences for pansy for being a total bitch to everyone in the past. It makes the story feel real. As for ron and hermione, I am not sure if i want a sex scene but some fluff scenes would be nice. As for plot you don't have to have pansy follow the trio everywere, but help out in her own way and just happen to meet up with harry in every chapter for some smex!

Damn, this is getting excited. What the hell is going to happen now? Pretty pleaase, write soon!

Excellent chapter. I enjoyed the whole 'Harry-Pansy-on-the-field-scene' though more smut could've been longer but no biggie. I enjoyed it still. I still care to know, where Pansy and Harry apparated.

As for those R/Hr scenes, keep them in the bare minimum. It's not that i have anythign against that pairing, but this is Harry Pansy fic so unless you're going to add Hermione into a threesome, i dont really want to read about them more than plotvise have to. Sorry, Thats just how i feel.

I think you should go with your gut feeling, whetever write it DH or your own. Whatever it was, i promise to read it.

See you soon.

Speaking for myself, I'd prefer to see you branch off and take the story in a different direction than DH, even if that does mean a longer wait between chapters. Also, while I happen to like Hermione and Ron (to a lesser extent) as characters, I have little to no interest in reading about them in a romantic sense. Something about their relationship just seems...off. I'll read scenes that show how their relationship is changing, but if you give them smut, I'll likely skim past it.

Loving it so far glad to see more Harry/Pansy keep up the good work!!!

I'm glad to see that they're not like 'Oh? You have a Slytherin for a girlfriend? And its the same one who's been treating us like shite these past few years? That's alright, we forgive her!' :P I do hope, however, that they get over it before Harry decides he'd rather have her with him than them. :P

I look forward to more chapters. Please update soon! :)