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Hermione made me laugh through this chapter with her indignant huffing about. I agree with Ron, though; her being bothered by Harry and Pansy's sex noises is a bit suspect.

Well, you know that I wasn't much of a fan of the Remus character assassination in that scene, either, but I liked what you did with it. The fact that even the adults in Harry's inner circle are wary of Pansy and find her suspicious says a lot about what they're up against. It is so typically Harry, though, that he sees that and fights for her, anyway. The reveal that Pansy knows all about Horcruxes is priceless! Maybe her background can start to help them out now, huh? I've noticed that they are all just assuming Pansy will be useless in their search, but they haven't even bothered to find out about her life and what she knows (and I loved Harry's dry delivery that he has a complex past. Lol, what an understatement). It will be interesting to see what kind of history Pansy has in her family tree.

I think you're setting up a nice dynamic between the four of them. Ron is too funny in his stuck position, but trying to play the mediator, nonetheless (oh, and one small quibble: what is nether the less? Is that the Brit phrase for 'nevertheless', because I've not seen it written like that before. Nether means below).

Also: he was eager to help us but underneath the service that should read 'underneath the surface.

Good job on the continuing evolution of the plot, Daye. I enjoyed the dialog.

Read through this and it's prequel all in one sitting. I'm really enjoying what I'm reading, and I like how even when it's obvious you don't care for certain pairings/storylines, you choose to simply ignore them rather than take useless potshots.

All in all, I love the awkward Pansy/Harry pairing and always will, and this is definitely one of my faves in the subject.

Chapter 2

Well, well, a cliffhanger already, eh? What an exciting escape. I do hope that Harry is reunited with Hermione and Ron soon enough, though.

A few notes for the top of the chapter: I thought you made a good point about Hermione expecting Harry to get over his hatred of Snape when she can't even see past her own prejudices. That is definitely a Hermione trait from canon. And I loved Ron's birthday gift to Harry, that was brilliant. Thank you for not making Ron a numbskull.

When Harry discovers that Pansy was beaten by her father, I felt so bad for her, but was not completely surprised. I certainly got the sense from the way you describe her life that her father would not be a very understanding man. But the way Harry rewarded her was full of WIN. You just know that Harry loves going down on the va-jay-jay, he's just the type for it. ;) And I'm sure he takes a lot of pride in his work. Lucky Pansy.

I hope Harry isn't too cross with her, but this sets the stage for some difficult times ahead as the four of them try to work together on the hunt. Looking forward to more.

Oooh, nice bondage there, Daye. I especially loved the detail of having Harry panic from his memory of the ritual. I can totally see that. But the fact that he gave her that opportunity to prove to her how he did trust her was a very sweet gesture. And made for some lovely sex :>

Aww, no butt plugs! Lol, you have a point. The scene worked better without it.

Chapter 1

Wow, Daye, I loved that opening! Really great writing. I think you have set the stage for some awesome banter and I'm very curious to see how Ron and Hermione are going to get adjusted to the presence of Pansy. The way that you have adhered to DH is very thorough, even though you've added this character into the mix. Your re-write of the fleeing of Privet Drive was excellent, the way everyone reacted. It would have been nice to get a little more backstory as to how Pansy was accepted into the household, though. I wonder how Mrs. Weasley feels about her.

Ginny's jealousy is pretty vivid. Can't wait to see if you use that in the future, but the way that Harry and Pansy are so much a team, right now I can't imagine anyone coming between them.

I loved It's Just Sex, and this is exciting me as well. I'm looking forward to further chapters. I'm now open to the possibility of Harry/Pansy, wow. I always favored Daphne and Tracey, lol. Good job.

Your statement about the rate at which this fic will be updated is unacceptable. You are not allowed to have a real life! I expect at least one update per week until this story is finished. Failure to comply will result in you being chained to a desk, and forced to subside on a diet of hot pockets and coke until completion.

Good chapter i am glad you didnt have pansy use toys on harry, i dont think it would have worked

Very good chapter. Thank you for the update. I keep on wondering what Pansy has to do in order for Hermione to at least know that she is on their side and will not betray them.
Liz

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Loved it! Keep up the great work!