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for What A Malfoy Wants

by christineyoung

person DSTorres
schedule June 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story thus far. I would say Ron filing to keep the kids from visiting at the Manor would be fair as Draco & Scorpius destroyed their family. However Ron should be more agreeable to a neutral site (supervised). He trusts Hermione but those other 2... Keep up the good work.
schedule June 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't know about bringing her children around the veela. I'm a mom and I would protect my kid with my dying breath. Then again, if the Malfoys know she would reject them or even kill them if they harmed her kids, would they harm them? But would she really want them to see her hormonally chained to those two, most likely behaving inappropriately and making them uncomfortable? What if Scorpius transferred to Rose? Hermione might kill him, but if Draco's transferred to Scorpius... Doesn't really tone down the awkward any, though.
schedule June 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, but there is no way that it should be 'equivalent to murder' in the slightest. If someone doesn't want to be tied to another person, 'mate' (I don't think those exist) or not they shouldn't be required to be.

Harry is right, the law reeks of injustice and it's time for the law to change...... at the sword of Harry Potter, if necessary.
schedule June 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Damn that sucks for Ron, and I totally agree with harry. Nice story but i am finding it VERY hard to like the malfoys lol.
schedule June 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I would have preferred it if you had stuck with Scorpius being hopelessly in love and trying to win Hermione's heart
person Avivafae
schedule June 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I absolutely love this story! Please tell me you're going to update soon!
schedule May 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Really impressed with this story! Don't think I have read anything like this before, really interesting and unique. Can't wait to see how she handles this!
schedule May 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, but the logical response is that Scorpius gets yanked from Hogwarts and home schooled. He's the one in the wrong here, even Draco admits it, so if they want any chance of Hermione not hating both of them for the rest of their lives, despite the bond, then they have to make it right.
schedule February 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading all your stories and you have a very seductive writing style. I wasn't into werewolves but last night I went to bed and dreamed about having sex with them hehe.
I really hope you continue this story soon. It's hot and I'm really curious what will happen next.
schedule February 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
why in the hell havent you updated this?