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beautifully done. happy birthday!

Wow! Awesome chapter, love the Veela love! Happy birthday!!!!

I just started reading the story, and I think it's fabulous. I only wish there were more chapters completed to read. I'm looking forward to your next update.

Happy birthday again! (Said it on Facebook) but of course people are still reading! Anyone who isn't are fools! I love this Fic and I'm so happy you updated!

this is really good I cannot wait for more

Hmm, I've read the story so far, and I have to wonder why Hermione is acting as passive as she is. She's about to become a sex slave for two perverts that are using drugs to keep her horny, and have told her that not only will she be their sex doll, but their brood mare. Given Hermione's stance on slavery, I'd expect her to react rather violently and try to kill them, and that's before you consider the kidnapping itself and taking her from her family.
The Malfoys have certainly proven that there's nothing redeemable about them and I hope she will kill them soon and then, as Hermione Malfoy, head of the Malfoy family, use the fortune and influence to change society to her views. I assume that's what the main point of the story will be... or are you going to keep it about Hermione getting drugged and raped by Malfoys? Because that'd be both disturbing and boring.

Like i have said before, i like this story ALOT, the one single solitary flaw in my opinion at least is how both the malfoy's flip flop between "oh i truly do love you Hermione and i hate that things have gotten this out of control and i promise it will be alright" to "Your mine and its within my rights to claim you and you have no say in the matter as the 'law' is on my side and i could kill your ex-husband......but i love you and want you to be happy.......as long as that 'happy' is what i decide it is" lol. It just feels at times like that kind of abusive boyfriend who takes away your ability to choose what you want to do and still claim to love you. Again i am honestly not trying to flame or knock you, i have read your other stories and they are golden its just that it seems here that Hermione goes from being the brightest witch of her age to some submissive little saint of a thing that is being put on a guilt trip by her captors and swayed by gifts and pretty words. I understand that it is mostly due to the Veela's instinct but this whole affair is not painting them in a good light when they have the ability to control their mate against its will. And will Ron be shown in a better light before this is done or will he lose the moral high ground to the malfoy's?

sorry just had to get that off my chest and please don't be offended by it as i intend on reading this to the very end regardless of the path you take with it. Also will we be shown the reactions of her children? I would feel a SMALL amount of sympathy for Scorpius if he went back to school and had the whole Weasley/Potter clan after his ass, Veela powers be damned lol.

big kisses! I'm properly vamped for the upcoming chapters

aww please dont make ron the villain of this just to make the malfoy's look better when all this crap is there fault, and it kinda seems like hermione is still giving in too easily to her abducters and jailers and she shouldnt have to feel guilty towards them. I understand that the pull between them must be hard to resist but come on this is freaking hermione lol i dont think a trip to santa's workshop is gonna be enough to sway her lol. still a good story, just has me raging at the "netorare" aspects and i cant wait to see how Hermione's children react and i wonder if they might try to get at Scorpius once school starts again.

I think the child custody issue can wait. We all are waiting eagerly for the bonding. After that, the less interesting issues can be resolved. I adore Veela stories and this one is delightful.