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for What A Malfoy Wants

by christineyoung

person Silversal
schedule November 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was great! And happy belated birthday hon, keep up the great work.
person Krystal
schedule November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well done on this. I just ignored everything else I was supposed to be doing this morning in favor of finishing this very compelling read. I am so excited to see what you have for the next part, to actually see how the triad dynamic will work out given their situation. Very excited to see the first encounter with Hermione and someone other than a Malfoy. Is Harry going to be the supervisor for the kids? That would be something, huh? I feel so bad for Ron, but his attempt to manipulate the situation using the parental rights had the reverse effect as it caused Hermione to lean on Draco. Who could have seen that coming though? I am glad she is seeing them both in a new light now. Very excited for how this bonding has effected them all.

Happy birthday, too!
person Lilyblack
schedule November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you've updated this story, it's one i cant seem to let go. happy belated bday and yes, people still read your stories- so update this one more :D lol
person Drake
schedule November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, I had hopes for the fic, but it looks like it has just become yet another rape fic, where the victim is mind controlled to love the experience.
person Rebecca
schedule November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Perfect! Please continue!
person snakegurl
schedule November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I thought that chapter was quite good. I started reading because I couldn't really see a way in which a Hermione/Scorpius romance was going to work - and I was hooked from the start, lol. Plus, I adore Veela fic's, so I'm always happy to see one with a fresh take on the subject. Hope you have a lovely birthday and looking forward to the next installment! I love your take on Draco and his willingness to suffer as long as Hermione was happy, btw, it's a side of him you don't often see.
schedule November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Rest assured that people are still reading your stories, I have read a few others and just haven't left a review. Was wondering when you were going to update this one as it is the one I am currently more invested in reading. Your are a master of writing top class dark sensual smut I just wish the softer sides of the malfoy's could have been shown earlier since feeling regret now on how they went about the issue with Hermione and denied her a choice is kind of pointless. As i brought up in a previous review they claim to love and practically worship her and yet A LOT of their earlier actions contradict that. As with a couple other stories where Draco and Hermione are paired up he comes off as very possessive, which isn't wrong it's just how he acts like a total ass to her and puts what he wants above her feelings and through use of manipulation/intimidation or questionable consent claims her as his while professing his undying love. Granted he shows regret for his actions later but it is usually after things have gone to far to be undone and Hermione has forgiven him and submitted. And as i have said before i completely understand that the Bond between a Veela and their mate is strong and both Draco and Scorpius have expressed regret with how they went about attaining her but Draco messed up and missed his chance as she has a career and a family and is essentially being told that those things will take a slight backseat. Okay now that my moral jabbering is done just allow me to say that i enjoy all of your stories and require a cold shower after most of them. I am also curious as to what will happen if the circumstances of the debacle that Scorpius caused come to public light. Since Hermione has quite a few loved ones with some serious connections, will there be any serious backlash against the Malfoy's? And I assume that her children will be even less fond of Scorpius once he returns to school and I doubt Hermione's extended family will be very welcoming.

Phewwwwww...well that was a long one eh? Always a pleasure reading your stories but alas.....I have a bit of a problem that requires a cold shower after reading this chapter. Cant wait for update.

ciao.
person Pan
schedule November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good work!!! Can't wait until the next chapter!!!
person Brenda Martin
schedule November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just want to let you know how much I enjoy ALL of your stories even though I don't review like I should. I'm sure there are alot of readers doing the same, so I don't want you to be discouraged by a lack of reviews. This is to let you know you are one of my favorite authors and I will follow you to what ever forum you post your stories on. I will try to start reviewing more often.
person Mz_Smitty
schedule November 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! Keep up the great writing!!! Sorry to hear that you were part of the disaster, but glad that you're okay :)