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Please don't let the naysayers with no appreciation or imagination get you down. There are many, many avenues to explore. The way the triadic relationship will evolve, the feelings among the three, whether they will have threesome sex at some point. Lots of aspects of the veela bond and nautre to explore. I love the story and am especially thrilled by how you have characterized Draco in this one -- loving father, long-suffering mate to Hermione, much more than the usual 2-dimensional Draco we too often see in fanfics. I adore this story and hope you will not let the nasty reviewers (who likely haven't written anything) get you down. Many of us love your writing and are thrilled to read every single chapter.

You're not a "shit" writer. People may have complaints about the lack of conflict (I don't) but then it is up to them to not read the story. I, for one, enjoy this plot and think there is plenty of angst without Ronald (I'm not a real fan of heavy angst, anyway). Remember, anyone can flame. Unless they are pointing out technical errors in terms of how you write (I've not picked up on any so the infractions must not be too bad) they can stuffy it. Nothing is worse than when someone gives their opinion with no intention to help a writer grow.

You are definitely NOT a shit writer. Your writing is fluid and cogent. The problem is that this is a rubbish plot. It's virtually impossible to suspend one's disbelief here given Hermione's character, regardless of the 'mates' plot device. Nobody's perfect, and rubbish plots happen to all writers *cough* deathly hallows *cough* at some point. Suggest you put this one to bed quickly and tickle your muse for something new to inspire you. I look forward to your next story.

I'm sorry to hear that you're getting discouraged. I've actually been really enjoying this story and looking forward to each new chapter. I'm especially interested in finding out how the three of them manage to balance a relationship. Keep up the great work :)

duh, no conflict? There can be conflict on various levels. Not all conflict has to be life/death or emotionally devestating. And there is nothing wrong with writing just a nice story. I can get exhausted reading too many stories that keep you in a constant state of fight or flight, so I appreciate one such as yours. Don't let the naysayers bring you down. They are welcome to find something else to read and leave you alone :-) . And if they expect perfect stories with perfect grammar, etc., then I suggest Barnes and Nobles. The vast majority of authors of fanficton tend to write because they enjoy it and this venue offers an exceptional means of sharing that love and the opportunity to grow and learn. The only thing I would complain about is I would love to see faster update *big smile*.

It is a shame you stopped posting on this story I really enjoy it. I'm sorry you have gotten some bad reviews but, remember its your story. This is supposed to be a free space for you to post what you want. Everyone is going to get a bad review at lest once, but fuck them. This story had plenty of drama in the beginning that it is nice things are leveling out. Please reconsider and post more of of this story. Remember opinions are like assholes everyone has one and they all stink.

I love this story and you have done a wonderful job picking up where the last author left. Please finish this one!!!

Sorry if this seems a little abrupt, but here i was at work the other day, almost at the end of my shift and daydreaming to kill time, my thoughts wandered to this fic............and i had one of those grand realizations which was that I have such a bad double standard. Allow me to explain, a few people, myself included that are reading this story have criticized some of the characterizations and the relationship Hermione has gotten strong armed into and how the Malfoy's kind of come as as amoral karma Houdini's, and then it hit me, had this been a story about say, a dominant FEMALE Veela Dominating and intimidating a regular MALE or if this were perhaps a Femslash(Dominant female Veela and regular witch), No one and I mean absolutely no one would be up in arms about it. These thoughts actually first came to me while a was reading a dark dominant Fluer and submissive Hermione slash fic where Fluer is acting no better than the Malfoy's here, but she has far less tender moments and is not doing much in the way to accommodate Hermione, and the thing was....it didn't bother me too much. I'm all like "oooh Dominant Fluer is sexy and she is acting real dark", then I realized how up in a tizzy I was about this story and I felt like a total Jackass. That epiphany struck me right upside the head and i would like to take this time to apologize about any complaints I personally have levied against you. You are a brilliant writer and this is ADULT fanfiction.net and people should expect things to get a little morally ambiguous. So keep up the good work.

Too piggy back off of my last review, may i make a request? Since i got all of that stuff off my chest, would it perhaps be possible for you too write a Dominate Fleur going after say Draco or Scorpius or perhaps a femslash with Fleur and Hermione? I have stated before that you are a master of sensuality and Dominance so thinking of those types of pairings written by you has me intrigued. It would be a nice change of pace to see one of the Malfoy's getting pursued and their are not near enough Femslash pairings.

there raping hermoine, magic bond it still rape, and could ron be afraid that rose would get into the bond, so i agree with him.