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Reviewed after first five chapters:

The sheer bizarreness of the situation is making me giggle. All this and Veela too?! - Okay, I'll just go with it - bring on the male Veelas and their DNA-altering mojo! This creature-fic is damn entertaining in its over-the-top way.

The initial scenes after the abduction were very nicely done: trying to figure out Scorpius had me going for ages - psychopath, lust potion, just deranged and obsessed, a crazy teenager or something more sinister? He was swinging back and forth from creepy to caring all the time. And when Hermione discovered her own responses to physical contact with him... OMG, things got even scarier. Good suspense when she tried to escape from Malfoy Manor, and running into Draco made it even more interesting - though the "Veela's mate" revelations took me completely by surprise. No longer a Weasley? Fast work, Draco.

Don't know yet if I'll keep reading this fic - probably yes, since I'm kinda curious to see what else could possibly happen to Hermione... If I do read on, I'll leave you another review later. This one's just to say the first five chapters are fun.

That was hot!!!!!!!

Sooo, chapter 16....overall a good lemony scene followed by a nice xmas scene. I did have to role my eyes when Hermione was so thankful she got her wand back...I mean wow, thanks, you gave me something back which was mine in the first place :/ Although I can understand that she must of been very happy to have it back. Was also very surprised at her kids reactions. After she saw them EVERY day at school, she just vanishes one day and when it turns out she has been abducted to be mated to 2 men and divorced from their father against her will they...get excited about a new brother? Um, okay. Wow. No shouting, no curses, no crying ...cool as a cucumber :/ Sociopathic tendencys?

Just got done with chap 8 and I have to say you are really doing a good job. I love love love that you are not making Ron an awful husband or all the Weasleys evil and the Malfoys some shining beacon of morality. Gawd, its awful when authors just make everything black and white. I really like that Hermione is fighting it...wonder what her kids will think...

I've been enjoying this story so much, I'll be sad to see it end, especially because your sex scenes are so hot and well-written. Having said that,if you're ending it soon, it would be fabulous if you decided to write a threesome for them. I don't know if I would actually want to have two men at once in real life, but reading about them is deliciously arousing. But, you're the author and I'm a happy reader along for whatever ride you take me on.

Missed this story. I love it.

Really enjoying this...glad you are planning to continue :)

Soooo happy to know you've started chapter 21...I love it!

I just re-read this wonderful story after not looking at it for a while. I love the veela triad you've created, as well as all the suspense at the beginning, wondering why Scorpius abducted Hermione. Veela Draco is marvelous--all sexy and distraught and full of longing. I am eager to see what comes next for all of them.

I really like this story. Regardless of what some twats say; I think youre an incrediblr writer, I wouldnt be able to write my own fanfiction. I dont know, I just dont find Scorpius and Hermione right. For me shes always belonged to Draco and Draco only. I just find it weird how father and son share thr same mate. I guess Im sort of hoping that Scorpius' mate changes to Rose like Twilight with Bellas child being his soul mate rather than Bella. Wishful thinking I suppose, but comtinue to upload and let me read more! Dont focus on the people who dislike this story; if they dont like it they dont have to read it, simple as.