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November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think you should do whichever ending feels best to you, whichever seems to spring organically from the story as you've developed it thus far. That said, the feel to this fic thus far has been dark, and if you want an HEA, you're going to have your work cut out for you in evolving the fic from its current darkness to something that supports HEA without feeling like it's just something that's been tacked on. Whichever route you take, I'm curious to see how you handle it, and I look forward to reading more.
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November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I honestly don't think I've ever read this triad. Usually it's Lucius and Draco being veela and sharing. If there is only going to be two to three chapters left it will almost have to be a dark ending. Wish it would last longer with them working it out to a happy ending.
Hope RL slows down and updates speed up. lol
Celest
Hope RL slows down and updates speed up. lol
Celest
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November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I have been fascinated by this story from the first. I don't know why, but it got in my head and stuck. I love the twist! And, I admit to being a happy-ending type of girl, so I want to see the three of them happy in the end. I only hope they realize her fear and alleviate it before moving to much more forward. And, what about her children? And, Ron? Boy, do you have a lot to fix. lol I look forward to it! Thank you, HG4eva
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November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story, and I think that this is an interesting twist on the Veela history.
As for your request... I could go either way, although I think her children are an important aspect to consider.
As for your request... I could go either way, although I think her children are an important aspect to consider.
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November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yesssss! Two Malfoys is better than one! I love the twist (it's probably because my original ship was Dramione) and I like the Veela thing. I'm a huge sucker for a happy ending so I hope you have one here! Excellent job so far!
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November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LIKE A LOT. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.
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May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't even going to give this story a chance b/c that pairing didn't appeal to me, but b/c I like your other stuff I decided to try it. I like it! I usually don't read stories with infidelity, but maybe you can make Ron a cheating bastard or something? To make me feel better if Hermione does give in?
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April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing...I like it.
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April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!
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April 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for another chapter! Wonder what Draco will do? I think the Lemons will be good, since she responds to him already.