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for What A Malfoy Wants

by christineyoung

schedule October 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What an awesome tale
schedule September 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Im so glad I actually decided to read this!!!!!!!! I really really REALLY cant wait for the next update now!!!
schedule September 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have been checking for this story every night. I am sooo glad you updated. :-) I love that Draco is trying to be gentle with her, but one of them had better show some understanding soon. They want what they want and her wants be damned?! If they care about her, they will start showing her that there's something, ANYTHING to be gained by this. She seems to have lost everything only to gain two men who want to sleep with her. I feel awful for her, Ron and her family. Please update again soon. I need then to have some shred of happiness. Thanks! HG4eva
person TomOfDC
schedule September 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is stupid. I don't care if you delete this, I'm just going to give negative reviews to any story that starts out with Ron and Hermione relationship and ends with another.
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I am very glad that you took this story over. The idea is too good to let it go unfinished. I left a review of this in the other site too but was just so impressed with it that I decided to re-read it and review again here.
schedule May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Plz update, I really like this story.
schedule March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Draco a vela?... Hermione his mate?... he,he,he... please!... why not hagrid?... or Dumbledore?... for Draco would be a better mate Hagrid... this would be more original... Oh, dear!... Draco!... he,he,he... probably all of them are impotent... too much endogamy... you know... he,he,he... Draco is sooooo manly... he,he... more or less as Hermione!!!... well, Hermione is a little more manly... Oh... please... It's tooo much... I think I going to read something with a bit more of sense... Oh, dear!... Draco and Hermione... he,he...
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, this story is FANTASTIC! I LOVE the twist and I LOVE that Hermione is no longer a Weasley, I never understood that pairing. PLEASE continue on with this story it is bloody brilliant!
person Avivafae
schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh.. I love this, I love this, I love this! I can't wait for the next chapter. Are you on FF.net too? It's so hard to keep track of the stories on this site. Please give me a shout when you update, cause I'd love to keep on top of it. And a veela triad, very original!
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm trying this out. So far I am not endeared to either Malfoy in any way. The fact that Hermione was happy with Ron makes it really kind of horrifying that these two would tear her away from that. That's not love, it's very selfish, but they are spoiled rich boys so I can see why you went with that. You seem like a good writer, and I will keep peeking in, I'm just thinking the worst that can happen is that Hermione will just end up as a favorite little blow up doll that they keep in a closet and pull out for sex. The best is if there would be some reason, some way and plot that can bring me around to having some sympathy for the Malfoys. If she ended them both now I would probably cheer for her. There has to be more than the artificial attraction of pheremones and dominance. You have a tough road ahead writing this, but I have hopes that you can pull it off. See you next chapter!