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March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think the story sounds very interesting so far. So please continue. ^^
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March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
so far I like it but i am hoping that it is just brotherly affection Harry has for the young boy and nothing else.
looking forward to the next chapter.
looking forward to the next chapter.
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March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved the first chapter, a little fast... but nicely developed. I really do love Alaenn, and I'm very curious to know as to how Draco gets along with him so easily. Well will keep posted... totally enjoying this. As or you needing a beta I would say not much, there are very minor errors, I believe if you proof read your work a few times the writing will be great.
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March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I think this is a rather interesting start to a story. hope u write more soon.