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schedule February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjpyed this story and would love to read some more. Thank you
schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo can't wait for chapter 4!!! Red eyes? Is he?
schedule March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok... I am very very very very very very very... confused! What is happening???? I feel as if this chapter was slowwwwwwwwwwwww like a lot of monologue and very little conversation... though I am intrigued I do hope you will explain something soon, like to whom the alliance or what happened that upset Ron so much... I know that the story is gonna be like this because if not it wont be a story at all, but please do clear some of the mist. And it was great none the less! ♥
person Juana13
schedule March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. that's a lot to take in at once! Poor Ron, what happened to him? And who had spread to everyone that Harry was gay.
Glad that Draco is trying to forge their friendship back together.
Maybe he can help Harry with his problem and the alliance?
Who did Harry make an alliance with anyway? Voldemort???
Update soon please!! Can't wait!!!
person stray523
schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i'm really likeing the story so far and can't wait for the next update. the only OOC-ness i've noticed is harry not being such a martyr and draco actually caring about someone besides himself and those are both good things. alaen sounds adorable, i like him and hope you don't write him out. i also really like the back and forth playful snarkiness between draco and harry and hope you keep that even if they become a couple.
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I know i may have been performing some mental gymnastics but when i read the whole Harry scruffing up Alaen's hair bit, and the blue eyes i jumped to Alaen being Harry and Draco's son... from the FUTURE! o_O but yeah... just a mental somersault ^_^ i'm eager to read the next chapter
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What an evil, evil place to end the story! write again SOON please!!
person Juana13
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow!!! really great story so far!! Loving it!
Hope to see what happens next!!!
Update soon please!!!
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter! D and H relationship is looking out to be great... In my opinion I don't feel them to be to OOC,you portrayed Draco as his snobby self but more like a teenager, and personally I like that, it's refreshing! and as for Harry I like him because he seems like the kid with a purpose and hero complex, but at the same time showing the maturity that comes with that situation... all in all LOVING IT!! ta ta darling~♥♥♥
schedule March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... not bad for an introduction, I am very intrigued as to the connection between the title and the story. Will keep posted for more!! ♥