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That was so cute! I love your story!

GREAT story, but the double-spacing drives me mad... it makes it harder to read...

Awwwwww!!!! they're living together!!! yay : )
Now, it's only a matter of time for them to lure Severus into the plan : )
I feel bad for Draco cause he was kicked out of his home, but I'm sure Sev and Harry will be able to make his stay there comfortable ; )
Hope you update again soon!! Can't imagine what you have in store for us readers in the next update!! Can't wait!!!

I have to say that Draco dealing with his parents was brilliant. I love how you have done Draco in this story and I am really enjoying how you are doing Harry. I really look forward to the three of them living together that will defineately make the relationship progress farther.

This relationship is going to be so interesting and you are developing it very well and I love that Hermione doesn't know what is going on.

Just like in 'Their Phoenix', your Severus is giving me shivers. I don't know what it is, maybe the way you write him so careful and (positively) calculative, or the way he just seems to be tired and that appeals to my nurturing side.

But he's doing it here again and he's beautiful, and I'll say it again -you need to write more of these three; for you and you alone I will read H/D.

I loved Severus' reaction to hearing Harry speak his name for the first time. I can't wait to see their dinner and where that leads ;)

I adore your Ron. Usually, even Percy is more favorable IMO. But the way your Ron was insightful and thoughtful and cheerful and supportive...I loved it. Thank you. I loved all of it. I can feel every squirmy, uncertain, knife's edge expression you paint your work with. It is beautiful. I never expected so much to happen in one chapter.

Really though, what did Snape expect him to think after kissing and then asking what else he could do? Anyone else would have reached that same conclusion. Not instinctively known that he was asking if he could live together compatibly with them.

This is gorgeous and graceful and I hope it never stops. Thank you.

~Mia

I love this story, thankyou:)

ooooh, this is getting very very interesting : )
Glad that they're now together?
now what's gonna happen?

My favorite three! I am embarrassed that it took me until now to realize who the author is. :) I'm really digging this fic, and I shouldn't be so surprised that there is an interesting, well-written, slowly-unflolding SS/HP/DM story being updated given that it's coming from you. I *actually* just had a moment of "Wait, this is Lomonaaeren's work? No wonder it's so good!"