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My goodness. That was ten different kinds of brilliant. Thank you. I love finishing a book and feeling triumphant about it. It lacked in nothing.

~Mia

Brilliant story! Thank you for writing it and I really liked how it all came out.

Well done!!! Loved it!!! I'll be looking for other pieces of your work!

^^ yaaay! brilliant again as always ^^ i jsut looove harry draco Severus ^^ such magic such beauty such lust and ooh the smut. ^^ just adore the thought of a command following powerful innocent like harry ^^. Yet another Masterpiece by you thanks so much!!!!!

Eep! I can't tell you how much I am looking forward to the next chapter.

~Mia

Awesome - I always enjoy your writing. Slightly bummed we didnt' get the virgin Harry sex-scene in there but I'm sure it will be that much more wonderful in the next chapter. Please continue writing - you are one of my favorite authors on the whole web. :)

I love that you have Sev's personality done...it is so great with him wanting to protect and how everything which has happened to him has affected him more than he would admit. I love how Harry is the one to break through to him and how Draco realizes that maybe the way he treated Sev wasn't the best...wow the twist in the personalities makes me very excited to read this story. Thank you

I have to say that the character development of Draco is going brilliantly. I love how he is finally in a grown up relationship and is willing to 'fight' for it. Thank you for another great chapter.

whatever made him think it would be. loved the use of similes by severus. i like that this story is lighter but still doesn't lose the theme of change and growth. i also appreciate that harry isn't having to overcome an issue other than choosing a direction more suited to himself. it's nice to have a breather from you. oh and the confrontation with lucius was superb. bravo draco! hopefully the meeting and the comfort will help him to grow more. til next time.

I know that the "I may someday write a story like that" is far from a promise, and quite out of the path that you normally write. But that little sentence caused me no small surge of hopeful joy. This was a wildly beautiful chapter. I love the detail and finess that your write into your wiley, cunning clever characters. Lucius was deliciously arrogant. Pansy was perfectly awful and her timing couldn't have been worse until it was turned around and all kinds of perfectly played happiness. And that last scene? I have never read anything sexier in my life. Just beautiful. I didn't realise how much I would like the bossiness element to it. It was beyond thrilling and tantalising. Thank you.

~Mia