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March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, this was a nice chapter. I love how you described in detail, the meaning and reasons for the name Hermione chose for little Carina. It was better with a longer chapter. So what's gonna happen next? Lol. B.
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March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love Love Love More More More
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March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You have my curiosity spiked. Would really like an update soon. Your chapters are really short so as yet I can't say whether or not I'm really into this story. (For me 3000 words is short)
Your spelling and grammar seem ok to me, I just want to read more. Keep it up.
Your spelling and grammar seem ok to me, I just want to read more. Keep it up.
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March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The deadpan teenage fangirl delivery is amusing. You kept the most annoying parts of that style out--no long descriptions of Hermione's perfect hair.
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March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, can't wait for the next update. :)
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March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ok.... that wasn't the most complex writing style, but atleast it's clear and too the point.... and not blotched like alot of others that i've read.... keep going...i'm eager to read more.
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March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good start keep it up!!!
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March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, this could be very interesting. The summary really caught my eye. I hope you will continue with this. I have a tiny request, could you make the chapters a tad bit longer. If not, that's fine, I'll take what I can get! ;)