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for Where Heroes Rush In

by SalonKitty

person Daye
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oddly after reading chapter 1, I did want to know what happened next. So I have continue, though I skimmed some sections.

Your Snape is a vile person, its almost hard to believe he's a secret good guy. (though that was hard to believe in the canon as well) THe interactions between Harry ans Ginny, alternating between anger fear and love is very good and realistic for their situation.

What are Ron & Hermione upto in this? Trying to rescue Harry? OR trying to hunt down the other Horcruxes and continue the mission without him.
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
My heart pounds. Please keep the nice long updates coming.
person Astender
schedule March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, very good fic. Tryna get my head around Voldy/Harry after having believed the two should never mix after almost 12 years of hp reading but you depicted the characters really well. Can't wait for your next chapter
person Daye
schedule March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You do Like to work dark don't you? That was... kinda disturbing really. The concept held some interest for me, I'll admit but I'm not sure I'll continue reading this I'm afraid. For one thing I'd missed the m/m tag in the summary. :S (Not your fault to be sure.)

Still nothing wrong with the writing itself. Though I note by way of nitpick; house-elf's and other magical creatures are not allowed wands. Only wizards are permitted the screts of wandlore. Considering Voldemort's creedo it seems unlikely he would change this.
schedule March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, but I don't understand, if the things Voldi makes Harry see at the end are supposed to replace his old memories, or what?