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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, excellent story, love the ending. I figured that Voldy made Ginny and harry super fertile, and did somethign else so that a small part of himself was in the first baby conceived.
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May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely positively epic. A really deep psychological study of deviance, and into the minds of these particular characters. I loved it.
I feel your Snape dialogue was a bit 'shouty', kind of hitting with rapid-fire insults, whereas I imagine him being a bit slower and almost methodical in it.
The writing was superb and very sexy.
I feel your Snape dialogue was a bit 'shouty', kind of hitting with rapid-fire insults, whereas I imagine him being a bit slower and almost methodical in it.
The writing was superb and very sexy.
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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well that beats the hell out of the original Epilogue at least. Quite a logical reaction for what happened to them in the main section; with their changing tastes and Harry;s worries. You'd think Harry and Ginny would be having a lot of therapy, though the wizarding world probably doesn't have professional therapists. I'm still a bit confused about Amon's side switchin. Still congratulations are in order for finishing this up. :D
Also, given your profile information, I was surprised at the inclusion of Draco in their hi-jinks, it kinda makes sense given what happened in Act III but nethertheless...
Also, given your profile information, I was surprised at the inclusion of Draco in their hi-jinks, it kinda makes sense given what happened in Act III but nethertheless...
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April 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Probably one of the best escapes I've ever read anywhere. I loved the passion, brutality and confidence they executed. "Why won't you die mother fucker?" LOL! Brilliant.
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April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Youch. Shades of your other enslaved Harry fic. Technically shouldn't Voldemort be a ghost/spirity thing once more? Since he still has the Horcruxes? Of course whether his Death Eaters will want to raise him a second time is up for debate. Good stuff. I look forward to the epilogue.
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March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love your dark and dirty story! You show that being the Devil
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March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
so harry and ginny aren't usually my pair of choice... but i really like this. Keep Going!
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March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Again, you manage to make such a unlikely and unpleasant situation so damned realistic and gripping that it keeps me on the edge of my seat. I love your characterizations. Ginny really comes to life here, and Harry is definitely IC. Poor thing. Is it bad that I'm still turned on? lol.
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March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just wow. I can understand all of the mixed emotions Harry is feeling, and I feel bad that Ginny has had to mentally adapt to this. But I have to tell you, her revelations and alone time with Harry were HOT!!! I love hypersexed!Ginny. I'm glad she was smart enough to take mental notes. What's up with the elves? I can't wait to find out the rest. I'm really glad these two have each other, because being alone with Voldemort with all of his perversions is enough to drive anyone mad. Great writing as always!
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March 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
^^ this is interesting and seems to have a lot of potential for character development. In future chapters, i'm looking forward to finding out what voldie's plans are for harry- I love the addition of parseltongue and hope to see more of it ^^ Please update soon!