schedule
February 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I cried for Harry. I'm so glad it turned out wonderfully!
schedule
October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I thought the story was great.The ending isnt what i would have picked, but to each his own.
good job.
good job.
schedule
September 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awesome story! i love harry's persistance... and the little girl is so cute!
schedule
March 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm usually a staunch HGSS shipper but I'm starting love Snarry more and more - this was a lovely story and I cried more than once. Thanks!!
schedule
March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww, loved it! Great job! Loved the dynamics you played with-- it's so nice to read things not explored so far.
Snape being sick was hilarious (not that he was ill, just how you described his atypical behavior and Harry's reactions). This line totally cracked me up and my dogs were wondering if I was ok....
'He was already clumsily burrowing his way into the blankets in some bizarre, mole-ish parody.' It's details like that which are so descriptive you can really "see" it. And that really make the story.
Can't wait for more from you (and looking forward to "heat" :)
Snape being sick was hilarious (not that he was ill, just how you described his atypical behavior and Harry's reactions). This line totally cracked me up and my dogs were wondering if I was ok....
'He was already clumsily burrowing his way into the blankets in some bizarre, mole-ish parody.' It's details like that which are so descriptive you can really "see" it. And that really make the story.
Can't wait for more from you (and looking forward to "heat" :)
schedule
March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just loved this story. it was cute and funny and heartbreaking all at the same time. Very Nice.
schedule
February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(Chapters 1-9)
Oh this is lovely! As I was reading Chapter 8, you posted Chapter 9........arrgghh! Please hurry with Chapter 10!
Oh this is lovely! As I was reading Chapter 8, you posted Chapter 9........arrgghh! Please hurry with Chapter 10!
schedule
February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful fic! You did such an excellent job of portraying Harry and Severus completely in character while also making their love believable. I love me an angsty fic with a happy ending, so thank you so much for making my day! :)
One little note, which is somewhat awkward to comment on, but I thought I'd go ahead and tell you anyway. While the sex was teh hot! I would like to point out that "dick" is American slang, and for me at least, always sounds odd seeing as Snape and Harry are British. I think "cock" is more commonly used by most English speaking people, or at least it's used in most of the other Snarry fics I've read. Not a big deal at all, and like I said, it was still smoking hot regardless of the word choice!
Anyway, this story was brillant and I do hope you plan on adding an epilogue, since I thought I saw a note about it in the first chapter. Also, I really hope you plan on writing more because you've done a fantastic job and I can't wait to see what comes next!
Best of luck with all your writing!
One little note, which is somewhat awkward to comment on, but I thought I'd go ahead and tell you anyway. While the sex was teh hot! I would like to point out that "dick" is American slang, and for me at least, always sounds odd seeing as Snape and Harry are British. I think "cock" is more commonly used by most English speaking people, or at least it's used in most of the other Snarry fics I've read. Not a big deal at all, and like I said, it was still smoking hot regardless of the word choice!
Anyway, this story was brillant and I do hope you plan on adding an epilogue, since I thought I saw a note about it in the first chapter. Also, I really hope you plan on writing more because you've done a fantastic job and I can't wait to see what comes next!
Best of luck with all your writing!