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for Living in Sin

by thepretender501

person Jilliane
schedule March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 2)


Yes, I'm still interested. Especially as to why Ron totally ignored Draco even though he must have overheard him shouting to Harry about wanting a flatmate.

Awaiting Chapter 3!
person coco
schedule March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Which begs the question... where did Harry's money go? :)

I like your story. It's interesting, amusing, and... weirdly topical (roommate and money scrounging for young people). Both Harry and Draco clearly have some issues, which leads up to interesting future conflict! I'm excited to see more.
schedule March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey come on, two chapters is NOT enough... even if i DID only just start reading. This is an awesome beginning... but it needs more... like a third, fourth fifth sixth... etc chapter(s)... Very good story... and I'm just impatient XD
schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love the new title. more please!!!
person Dadella
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
can I just "like" this? you know, like on Facebook? ^.^ You're too good a writer to just give up on something, I say keep going! I meant it when I said (implied) you were my favourite author here... you're good at it, quit doubting yourself! Now, get with teh steamy!
person paigeey07
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it!
person Jilliane
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM

Nice start. I like the premise, that Harry needs to get a flatmate to help pay for rent and, presumably,food, and that he's faced with an unsavoury alternative if he doesn't, one he's evidently had to resort to before. I like all that. Only....Harry is a wizard, so even if it were a Muggle flat, why doesn't he just conjure light and heat for himself? Still, I'm interested to see where you go with this, and look forward to the next update.
person tiggator
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... it could possibly interest me. I say stick with it and see what transpires. There are definitely things that can work with the two living together, things I would definitely like to read. :)
schedule February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
sounds promising!