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for Living in Sin

by thepretender501

person anna
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
KEEP WRITING PL0X
i like it :D
person Clutz
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Every chapter gets more and more interesting. I don't think I've ever read a fic where they were both sluts. I'm kind of worried how sex between these two are going to be since they both seem to prefer to bottom. Well, just wanted to say I can't wait for the next chapter! Loving it so far! :D
schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 should be interesting!!! Can't wait to hear Harry's story!
person Lola
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You have a really nice witty way of writing. I totally love this story, and hope you will finish it to the end! :3
person Dopeydd
schedule March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Not sure about it yet but was ready to hit the button for the next
page. Can't offer any advice because I can't figure out yet what
I like or dislike about it. Sorry.
schedule March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol i'd be a hypocrite not to like Malfoycest as thats what my main story includes
This chapter was really good!!
I liked Wood's last line!! poor zach tho...lol
Great chapter!!
Can't wait for more!!!
person Jilliane
schedule March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 3)

Still interested. Even more so now that Harry has seen the goods. And Draco....quite the little slut he is! LOL! Dying to know if he actually goes home with Wood. *snicker*


And you know, I wasn't intentionally trying to call you out. They were just questions I was curious about. Looking forward to seeing what this "thing" is between Ron and Draco. Makes me wonder if sluttish little Draco didn't compromise Ron at some point. Oh, the angst of it if he did!


Please hurry with Chapter 4!
schedule March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this! You should definitely continue. And I'm intrigued to know where Harry's money went, there was a hint at the end of the second chapter that he did have some money but it was used up on ... something?? And Malfoy is a bad bad boy!
~gorgeousbowneyes
schedule March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I have been putting off reading this story for about a week now (college and stuff) and I gotta say I feel bad about it now. The story is amazing, I love the way you portrait them, even if they are different then any other story I have read, they still feel so real, its like they flow smoothly! I am really loving this, so please more...

P.S. I have a theory to were Harry's money went to but I don't wanna say it just yet! ♥ Safe to say I believe it will bring him and Draco closer.
schedule March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
o0o0o0o0o0o This story seems very promising
can't wait to see what silly shenanigans our boys will get u to living together
wanna know how harry lost all his money...he had a lot of it
and love the little Daddy/Draco bit...they're an interesting pair
Love the story so far
Can't wait to read more!!
Kyle