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February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great start -- the plot is a really original premise for a HP/Twilight xover and I'm looking forward to seeing how things progress, particularly how Cedric reacts to his and Harry's child!
Only thing I could nitpick about was the fact that there was a 'chase' where there should be a 'chaste'. If you're finicky like me, you might wanna change it, but it doesn't change the fact that you've already got me hooked ^_^
Only thing I could nitpick about was the fact that there was a 'chase' where there should be a 'chaste'. If you're finicky like me, you might wanna change it, but it doesn't change the fact that you've already got me hooked ^_^
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great start so far
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good prologue!
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i like it so far. I haven't seen a Cedric/Edward & Harry story like this. It has a lot of promise to it. can't wait to find out what the rest of the world thinks of Harry being pregnant.