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by IamaSlashAddict

person Anon
schedule April 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!! Update soon!!!
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That... Was freaking heartbreaking! *wails* Poor Harry!

Seriously though, the sex was simultaneously smokin' and tender, and to then have Harry wake up realising that he's never getting Cedric back? (Can hardly wait to see his reaction when he *does* get his man back though! *grins*) ZOMG. T_T Harry's voice in this mini-chap / half-chap (whatevs) was so realistic and it was a fantastic update to spark our interests and keep us hanging for more. ^_^

Also, is good to see that you're updating again, have missed seeing this story at the top of the xover's listing!
schedule March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I was trying to go to the Naruto section of aff.net on my cell phone but it wouldn't let me. So still wantingt to get my yaoi fix and seeing as my phone would allow me to tap into the HP section of aff.net I went because it's been a while since I read from that section anyway. Well any how my phone is very finicky and wouldn't let me go to the yaoi section but would suprisingly let me go to the 'crossover section' And usually I cringe at crossovers because people try to mesh other animes/tv shows/stories into that magical world of HP that really don't belong unless under special circumstances. Yes, I'm rambling but I'm getting to my point soon ><

Well... yeah... I was doubting my phones capabilities but I happened onto your twilight/HP story and I'm like how the frick would this work but my mind made a connect the dots with the fact that the same character who played Cedric Diggory also played Edward Cullen and I had a complete V8 moment. Yes, yes, once again rambling but it made me curious to see how it'd all tie together and the way you did it was very lovely indeed.

I want to read more twilight/HP stories like yours now... You have a way you do it that doesn't make the characters seem all OOC and I never really liked Bella anyway. I mean after she freaking screwed over Jacob I wanted to bitch slap her. I mean sure I'd be hung over too if a hot vampire left me but you have the werewolf boy from next door who wouldn't leave you like that and awww Harry has a child with Cedric so more reason they shouldn't be broken up. And aww how could you do that to Hermoine and Ron. It's bad enough one of the twins died... that's not good enough for you is it? No, you had to take out the whole bleeping family though it's barely a consildation that you spared Sirius. But still... and aww can't wait to read more.

Sorry, it's a ranting, rambling sort of review but I do like it... it's not a flame... I don't think it's a flame. It's just that part was sad. And oh I want their house with the garden in the middle, sounds peaceful and wonderful. They could probably stargaze from the garden while still be in the semi comfort of their own home. Can't wait to see how Remus takes to the La Push pack since they'll run into them and I'm pretty sure that Rosalie would actually take a liking to Harry over Bella. Brunette just has to watch out.

Meh, love it all, wish for more soon. Ended too soon for me and if you could possibly e-mail next time you update I'd be freaking tap-dancing in my head from joy.

simplywandering@yahoo.com

Thank you, thank you... bye
schedule March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Edward is being stupid!!!! Very stupid. Hopeful it doesn't tale long for him to take his head out of his *ss. More soon.
person Lenora
schedule March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Normally I would bookmark a story that I like and check back every couple of months...however, this story has captured my interest so quickly in the 4 chapters that are up, that I'm leaving this up on my browser in hopes of new chapters coming soon.

I hope you update soon.

-Lenora
schedule March 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Harry's reaction to seeing Bella all over Edward/Cedric was really well written. Well, even more well written than usual, at any rate! I'm loving the fic so far; it's nice to see a Twilight/HP xover that has school aged Harry AND Hermione and Ron. Really looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay, awesome chapter!!!
schedule March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very clever story idea!! love it!! cant wait for more =]
schedule March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. More soon
schedule February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, yay, update! ^_^

I love the fact that you've come up with an original nickname for Harry's little girl, and major bonus points in my opinion for actually making the child a girl! I know it's twice as likely in terms of DNA that any child from two males would be male, but it's so nice to see a baby girl in an mpreg story. Baby James' are so overdone. Lilu is much better!

I really like the way the story is shaping up, and I'm eagerly anticipating the next chapter. Though I'm not sure we as readers should really be feeding you feedback habit! Surely we should be making you go cold turkey not encouraging it! *grins*