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December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think you are too proud of your vocabulary and the story suffers a bit because of it. Also, most characters are completely out of character, and the intimate scenes are almost skipped over, having an almost complete lack of detail. I feel like the plot is great, and this could be a grand story with a bit more time taken on intimate areas and character personality.
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November 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have enjoyed every chapter of this story and await each new chapter. I have loved many of your stories and I thank you for giving such wonderful stories for all to enjoy.
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November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A well written, amusing and intriguing story so far.
I have currently read to chapter 18 and eagerly await further chapters.
The story is progressing well, and I hope the author will see this through to completion.
Yes, there are some different forms of address, ie auntie/uncle for Molly/Arthur, Kreacher has redeemed himself, even Walburga has changed opinions.
In my personal opinion, a good story and one I am pleased to ad to my personal favourites list.
I have currently read to chapter 18 and eagerly await further chapters.
The story is progressing well, and I hope the author will see this through to completion.
Yes, there are some different forms of address, ie auntie/uncle for Molly/Arthur, Kreacher has redeemed himself, even Walburga has changed opinions.
In my personal opinion, a good story and one I am pleased to ad to my personal favourites list.
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September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15 please!!!
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September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 14 please!!!
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August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Tooo cute!!! Chapter 14 please!!!
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August 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!!! Can't wait for chapter 12!!!
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August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for chapter 10! You posted chapter 9 twice!
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August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just to let you know you posted the exact same chapter as lest time.
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August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I re-read this whole story to see that at the end you add chapter 10, but it was chapter 9 all over.
I guess that it's a mistake and to be able to read the real chapter 10 soon.
I like this story very much.
Read you soon
Phoenix5
I re-read this whole story to see that at the end you add chapter 10, but it was chapter 9 all over.
I guess that it's a mistake and to be able to read the real chapter 10 soon.
I like this story very much.
Read you soon
Phoenix5