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by ryuchan001

schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I AM LOVING THIS!!! Neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed more so please!!! Write soon! ♥
schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
For the love of god MORE!

I haven't read a fluffy fic in years, but this is so good I'll consider reading them more often.
This is a fantastic first story, I love how it's gradually developing and Draco and Harry are slowly becoming friends.
Will there be any Harry/Draco any time soon?

Great job, can't wait to read the rest! xXx
schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Found one little mistake. In the first paragraph you wrote ignoring but ended it with an f not a g. Other than that little error. BLOODY FANTASTIC CHAPTER!!!!! Totally loving the twins...they're so funny and also loyal. Ron is being a completely ignorant sod. Yeah a ticklefest really looks like shagging. *rolls eyes dramatically*

Disappointed in the way Hermione is acting. The fact that she used magic against Harry was really deceitful. And her response to the fact that Harry has accepted Draco as a friend was very pathetic and spineless. The gossips of the school making up ridiculous stories is crazy. It's great that you've made some of the canon characters that I liked be completely acting in ways that have made me dislike them in this story. Well done :)

Hehehehe loved the way Draco and Harry woke up cuddling. So cute :D

Can't wait for the next chapter
person Elvira
schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absotuly loved it!!!! Oh, whats going to happen when they see him in Slytherin robes?
Hmmm....

Update soon please!
person veracityrules
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Axel, sorry to contact via a review for your story but your email address is not available. Don't worry, I'm not a weirdo or anything, I'm just another huge Snarry fan who is a big fan of a fic we are both reading at the moment; the Snarry fic Deserving by Moon of the Sea. I saw your last review when I posted mine for the latest update and I noticed that you mentioned it was the first one that made you cry. It is excellent isn't it?

However, I too have a particularly favourite Snarry fic and it is so gut-wrenchingly emotional it will have you crying like a baby if you are interested. It's that good! I bookmarked it about 18 mths ago and frequently go back and read it and it never gets old! I have posted the link below if you want to check it out. Trust me, you won't be disappointed. Again, apologies for hijacking you review board and email address is veracityrules@aol.com if you want to bollock me for sending a fic rec via your review board!

http://thetwobroomsticks.slashcity.net/siren/AttheHeartofThings.html
person Elvira
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice, Nice! love it!

Update soon!
schedule February 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
BOOM!! Ron's anger bomb exploded. Very well written, it sounds just like the Ron we've all come to know. Really don't blame Hermione for staying out of the argument. Harry's reasoning was very sound. I liked the way you had Harry and Draco interact, I would put them as being neutral at the moment. (Harry neutral, Draco's being friendly.)

I saw a spelling error, you wrote poition (position?) in the part where Ron wanted to hide behind Harry because all of these people were annoyed that he got them stuck in groups. No biggie :)

Can't wait for the next one....it's starting to get very intriguing
person Elvira
schedule February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!!!

I like it so far so please update when you have the time!
person layne378
schedule February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very good
schedule February 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
still reading and liking it. one thing though i don't know how much you care but the truth serum is a 6th or 7th year potion other then that it was good