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for A Victorious Draw

by nastygrl

schedule April 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First off, I can't believe that there are only 7 reviews for this amazing story. This was absolutely fabulous and I love how you wrote Ron. He was so mature and I so would love to see a companion story to this focusing on Ron and Pansy. That would make a great story. Plus, it would give you a chance to update us on Snape and Hermione's marriage! Again, amazing story and I can't wait for more!!
schedule March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I bleieve there is a French phrase for that feeling: Coup de foudre. A thunderbolt that hits you without warning. very good chapter, I loved the interplay beween them and your internal dialogues were excellent.
person alm1067
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading and I really like how you are taking this story. It is very different from others in how you are getting Hermione and Snape togather. I think you are doing a great job, please keep updateing. I want to know how this ends.
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ron with depth? Ok, I'm in.
person hairsprayX12
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ron's the man!!!

I liked how everything was so logically laid out by him and Hermione listened for a change.
person hairsprayX12
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing and finally someone who writes Ron as more then a glorified sidekick.
person Bubbles
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A very promising start. I like that Ron for one time is the one seeing Severus and Hermione together. In most other stories he is just a brat, but here he seems to be as mature as I think he would be after a war and all that.
Keep on writing please.