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by triz

person kittykat
schedule March 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG i totally love 'Dinky the Dragon' hes sooo sweet. I really hope you continue with this story it could be such a great story. I usually dont read a story if its got structure errors like this one does but when i opened it and read the first part I was hooked. I hope you can fix this and make it easier for others to read. Cause they may me like me and skip it and then they would miss a totally adorable story! Good luck!
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
SOO CUTE! Loved the story it was sweet and cute. Ugh, Ron is such an ass grr. Hehe anyways good job *thumbs up*
person Mitsu
schedule March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved the fluff, and I would love to see more of it. I hope that you will consider continuing it! =hands over truffles for a lovely first chap=
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story. Very sweet and mushy, just what we all need for a Valentines Day pick me up.

The only thing that would make this story better, is a second chapter where Mudby and Dinky are in a relationship and more Ron bashing can happen. It felt in a way that the Weasel got the last word, so much nicer if he's left standing there with a vacant expression and open mouth.

I liked your style, only a few spelling/grammar mishaps. Not enough for me to get pedantic about though.

Keep writing :)
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
seriously u should make this more than a oneshot i love it and i dont think it seemed ended....
person jreel08
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please write more. i love where this is heading
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a very sweet Draco. But I didn't get the 'donkey' part-- why she came up with that name. The rest of it was cute, and I'd love to see what Ron says when she shows up with Malfoy some day. Perhaps we can bribe you into writing that. :D
schedule February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet! You could actually turn this into a chapter fic.

But just so you know "Weaselette" is a nickname for Ginny, Ron is just plain "Weasel".
schedule February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Actually I think this could easily be expanded, even though it's nice the way it is. Very sweet, and who cares about ron-bashing?
person sarah
schedule February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG THAT WAS SO FREAKING CUTE! YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE!!! that was sooo cute!!!!! i loved it!!!